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I want to make a list of the admitted mistakes by GRRM, and sources as well to help. I don't have any sources, but these are the ones I've heard.

Renly's eye color in A Game of Thrones, changes from blue to green.

The amount if gold in the tournament of the hand prizes is far too much.

Jeyne Westerling is presented by separate characters as having different sized hips.

Anyone know anymore? Or sources for these?

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The only "mistakes" he admits to are vaguely about eye color and the sex of some horses. He says otherwise his "mistakes" are intentional and all "misinformation" is the result of differing POV's.

Val's eye color changes as well.

I know the certain ones are supposed to be there. But I want to figure out what stuff he has admitted are wrong.
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He started the novels with some of the younger characters too damned young (Arya and Bran in particular.)


This is what made the 5-year gap necessary, and his strategic decision to eliminate the gap was not handled well at all.


AGoT spans about 15 months of in-universe time, but as the series progresses each novel spans less time when it should span more.


ASoS and ADwD TOGETHER only span about 8 months, when they should have spanned YEARS to make up for the lack of the gap.



Those are strategic mistakes that affect the entire progress of the books, (and also how long it's been taking him to write them) not details like eye colour or whether someone's horse is a mare or a gelding. But they are mistakes, and very serious ones that limit what he can do with those characters in the books to come.



If you've read the preview chapter "Mercy" ...


Mercy (aka Arya) is doing things at the age of 11 that, when GRRM wrote it, he intended her to be at least 15 or 16. (It was written BEFORE ASoS/ADwD, and before he'd abandoned the gap.) This makes it far more controversial than it should be, and there are certain areas where he can't go without risking criminal charges for creating child pornography. I'd say that's as serious as it gets.


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Didn't he say he made the Wall far too tall, like almost impossibly so?

I'm pretty sure you're right about that one. :agree:

There's an anecdote about GRRM visiting the set where they shoot the Castle Black scenes, and looking at the wall (the side of a quarry in Wales painted white and blue) and exclaiming, "That's FAR higher than I imagined!"

The quarry wall was about 200' IIRC, the wall in the books is 700' high. But GRRM is innumerate. I doubt he could do arithmetic up to a 6th grade level. Realistically the wall would be maybe 70 ft. high, or 100. He's also no damn good with distances or the time it takes to travel them, and I've already mentioned that he has serious problems with time in general.

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He started the novels with some of the younger characters too damned young (Arya and Bran in particular.)

This is what made the 5-year gap necessary, and his strategic decision to eliminate the gap was not handled well at all.

AGoT spans about 15 months of in-universe time, but as the series progresses each novel spans less time when it should span more.

ASoS and ADwD TOGETHER only span about 8 months, when they should have spanned YEARS to make up for the lack of the gap.

Those are strategic mistakes that affect the entire progress of the books, (and also how long it's been taking him to write them) not details like eye colour or whether someone's horse is a mare or a gelding. But they are mistakes, and very serious ones that limit what he can do with those characters in the books to come.

If you've read the preview chapter "Mercy" ...

Mercy (aka Arya) is doing things at the age of 11 that, when GRRM wrote it, he intended her to be at least 15 or 16. (It was written BEFORE ASoS/ADwD, and before he'd abandoned the gap.) This makes it far more controversial than it should be, and there are certain areas where he can't go without risking criminal charges for creating child pornography. I'd say that's as serious as it gets.

I did read that chapter and it was disturbing for sure. What gets me is that his editor said he read a controversial Sansa chapter, should have been Arya, unless....
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