The English professor who ran a workshop for my writing group recommended, specifically to me, Kearney [amongst other authors] since he thought our styles were somewhat similar, additionally citing that I might learn as much from what Kearney did wrong as what he did right.
Being a bit of a classical history buff, I chose The Ten Thousand as my first foray since I knew what I was getting into insofar as Kearney's world development was concerned.
For the most part the characters were well wrought and believable, excepting perhaps Gasca who didn't seem relevant overall, except, perhaps, to give us a developing greenhorn PoV from within the heavy infantry --which imo could've been done through Jason to much better effect-- and to the benefit of his development, but that's to pick a nit.
What surprised me however, was the author's choice to really invest himself in the
build-up to the fateful battle between the two brothers and then wind down in a blasé manner throughout the Macht withdrawal [which imo, was actually the more interesting part of the real Ten Thousands' story-- the hardships beyond mere thirst and hunger, the mad honey incident,
etc] and so robbing the final act of emotional impact, for me anyway.
There were some grammatical editing gaffs, but as mentioned above the pacing toward the end just didn't pull me along with it. I had to work at staying interested. There were beats where they weren't necessary [then there weren't beats when they were] and the showdown between Rictus and Aristos [sp?] just
lacked. I don't know why, but I could see it coming,
i.e. Jason,
etc
My critiques invariably focus on the negatives [or needs improvements] so some positives:
The first scene, our introduction to Rictus, was beautiful. Kearney's prose is enjoyably readable, sometimes even poetic [insofar as rhythm, but he should self-edit a little more to whittle out where it strays into purple] The Curse of God element was very cool, a sci-fi component that must’ve been edited out of the original text [there were several passages implying that Human’s are the aliens on this world] I wanted to know more about that.
I certainly found myself wishing The Ten Thousand had been longer, and based on what I read I'll definitely try Kearney again. So, ultimately, for an author or his work there's no bigger rec than that.
A good read, only a little disappointing, and though I was a little underwhelmed I was intrigued enough to want more.
This post has been edited by Statler/Waldorf: 01 September 2008 - 11:03 AM