[Book & TV Spoilers] What was left out, and what was left in
#1
Posted 25 April 2011 - 01:12 AM
1. "It should have been you."
Again, a great line that really nails the relationship between two characters, completely disregarded for no good reason.
2. Tyrion waking up in the kennel
Would have liked to have seen him in the library so the whole "Why do you read so much" line had more merrit. But this change wasn't that bad overall.
3. Queen Cercei going to see Bran
This was an odd scene to me. Yes, it fleshes out Cercei's character a bit, but the notion that she ever would allow herself to birth a child of Robert's is a complete left turn from the character as she's written in the books. In the books, she was so full of hate for Robert she aborted the only child he ever impregnated her with. An odd decision, though I see why they did it.
4. Lack of Direwolves, in particular Ghost.
Seriously, Ghost is kinda important, and yet he's nowhere to be seen. You didn't even see him TRAVELLING with Jon. Is he just gonna magically show up soon? And no sight of Grey Wind or Shaggydog, or the fact Bran hasn't named Summer yet. Sigh.
5. "She didn't hurt you... much."
Again, a great line left out for no real reason. When Arya says that to Joffrey after Nymeria attacks him, it was such a great moment in the books. It would have been great here, and yet... nada. Double sigh.
6. No Barriston The Bold or Renly
Guess they're saving them for later, but it would have been nice to introduce them along with Illyn Payne. His introduction seemed rather odd, and the Hound didn't come off near as menacing to Sansa as he should have.
7. No dreams.
I guess they're leaving the dreams out ofthe show. Would have been nice to see Dany's dream and Bran's.
8. Jon and Tyrion's scene
Again, close but no cigar. The writers seem dead set on not letting Jon and Tyrion have the great relationship they have in the books. The whole "Most men would rather deny a hard truth than face it" was SO IMPORTANT because it made Jon truely trust Tyrion, and tought him a valuable lesson. But alas, instead we get extra dialogue about the Kingslayer. That, plus no Ghost and no introduction to Yoren, who does play an important roll later.
Overall, I thought the scenes with Danny were handled well, and the episode as a whole moved better than the pilot. The whole Catelyn investigation into the tower where Bran fell was a little odd, but I can see it was necesasary. Would have liked to have heard more explanation about the conspiracty to kill Bran like they had in the books, but it's not a big deal, they got across what they needed to.
Hopefully they stick closer to the books as the series goes on.
#2
Posted 25 April 2011 - 03:53 AM
Not sure where ghost was. But it felt like a continuity error.
#3
Posted 25 April 2011 - 04:37 AM
#4
Posted 25 April 2011 - 04:40 AM
#5
Posted 25 April 2011 - 06:14 AM
#6
Posted 25 April 2011 - 06:15 AM
Been a long time.
#7
Posted 25 April 2011 - 06:52 AM
The_Halfhand, on 25 April 2011 - 01:12 AM, said:
Again, a great line that really nails the relationship between two characters, completely disregarded for no good reason.
5. "She didn't hurt you... much."
Again, a great line left out for no real reason. When Arya says that to Joffrey after Nymeria attacks him, it was such a great moment in the books. It would have been great here, and yet... nada. Double sigh.
Those are the 2 main things that bothered me in their absence in the 2nd episode. I was shocked not to hear the "it should have been you" from Catelyn. Sure, we get some idea of the enmity between her and Jon, but that line just tells the entire story, I don't understand how could they leave it out. And what did Ned do in the room in that scene??
And the 2nd one...It strikes me kind of odd that they did have Jeoffry say "I won't hurt you...much" but didn't have Arya say the counter...took all the punch out of it....
Other noticeable things that were left out are the close relationship between Arya and Jon - the completing each other's sentences and the messing Arya's hear, but I get why they left it out as it's even not that meaningful in the books.
Another line that I wish they would have left in the show is Cersei telling Robert "The man I wed would have put a pelt on my bed before sundown" or something like that, as it sheds a bit of light on the relationship between Cersei and Robert.
I didn't mind the "left ins" though, they were quite nice and most of them necessary for things that can be expressed in books(thoughts) and not on the screen.
#9
Posted 25 April 2011 - 08:26 AM
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Really? I think they got their relationship fairly well-established with the goodbye scene. Much of that was from the book, too.
Regarding the direwolves: honestly, the biggest thing I'm missing is Grey Wind. We see some shots of Ghost as Jon is traveling north, but Ghost doesn't really do anything yet and is off hunting most of the time. Summer, Lady, and Nymeria all feature prominently, as they should, and we don't even see Rickon at all so it's understandable that we don't see Shaggydog either.
But I feel like Grey Wind needs to be with Robb a lot more. Hopefully they'll fix this as Robb comes into his own and start leading armies, that's what makes his legend grow is Grey Wind stalking beside him and tearing up men and horses.
#10
Posted 25 April 2011 - 08:33 AM
Ser Helman Tallhart, on 25 April 2011 - 08:19 AM, said:
#11
Posted 25 April 2011 - 08:33 AM
NW Deserter, on 25 April 2011 - 08:26 AM, said:
As I recall, Grey Wind really makes his first impact on the reader when Tyrion meets with Robb during his return trip through Winterfell. Hopefully he'll do the same onscreen.
GileanTheGrey, on 25 April 2011 - 08:33 AM, said:
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Edited by Ser Helman Tallhart, 25 April 2011 - 08:36 AM.
#12
Posted 25 April 2011 - 09:29 AM
The_Halfhand, on 25 April 2011 - 01:12 AM, said:
Did Yoren really appear that early in the books? I thought you met him later. At any rate we know that he's in episode 4 at least so I don't think it's a problem.
Edited by ingsve, 25 April 2011 - 09:29 AM.
#13
Posted 25 April 2011 - 09:29 AM
And Ned killed Lady with a dagger ... seriously, wtf?!
Edited by Solmyr, 25 April 2011 - 09:30 AM.
#14
Posted 25 April 2011 - 09:45 AM
I think Cersei's comments helped to keep people off-balance regarding her, so that she can't just be pigeonholed into "mustache-twirling evil" category. If we find out later that she killed the child in question . . . it will make her seem even more unpleasant.
I agree that the Jon-Tyrion scene was a little off. Jon needed to be more emotional - Tyrion's quips actually got under his skin. I suppose we'll get Jon's period of disillusionment at the Wall next episode instead.
#15
Posted 25 April 2011 - 09:55 AM
The dialogues sound like the Director is teling them to read their lines, and then he films it and says, "Ok, we got that one, let's move to the next scene"... The whole series of scenes where Jon is leaving for the Wall should have been filled with emotion - Jon saying goodby to a comotose Bran - I believe there were tears involved in the book... Jon saying goodby to his beloved little sister, Arya... Jon saying goodby to the one person who is truely his contemporary brother, Rob, the one he grew up with... All the conversations were flat and emotionless, like watching a high school play...
The scene where the assassin comes in the room and finds Catelyn there... Lines recited like they were just going over them in a dress rehersal... "Your not supposed to be here..." FLAT! The best actor in the whole scene was the dog... The actor could have been a janitor they pulled onto the set just to fill in for the moment...
The scene with Catelyn informing her trusted few of her suspicions and her intent to go to King's landing - Everyone standing around trying to look intense and dramatic, and the lines were just rushed and flat...
Also, the way they are presenting Cat and her attitude toward Ned is all wrong... She blames him for leaving for Kings Landing - In the book she was the one who told Ned he could not refuse the king... That it would be political suicide... I do understand that some changes must be made when working within the constraints of such a project, but these people are making major changes to the characters and their motivations... I am not pleased...
I am beginning to believe that they are rushing the entire story to get it to fit into neat 30 minute packages... Its like they are telling the viewers, "Ok let's move along - We have a lot of material to cover..."
My wife actually suggested this morning that we UNsubscribe to HBO and skip the rest of the series - She was that disappointed with it last night... And I am having trouble finding a reasonable arguement against her suggestion...
Edited by Lazarus, 25 April 2011 - 09:57 AM.
#16
Posted 25 April 2011 - 09:58 AM
Solmyr, on 25 April 2011 - 09:29 AM, said:
As for the efficacy of a dagger vs. a greatsword - a dagger can end life just as quickly and mercifully if properly placed and wielded. Ned no doubt has plenty of hunting experience so I'm sure at some point he'd have put an elk, boar or some other beast out of its misery in a similar fashion.
#17
Posted 25 April 2011 - 10:13 AM
Lazarus, on 25 April 2011 - 09:55 AM, said:
The dialogues sound like the Director is teling them to read their lines, and then he films it and says, "Ok, we got that one, let's move to the next scene"... The whole series of scenes where Jon is leaving for the Wall should have been filled with emotion - Jon saying goodby to a comotose Bran - I believe there were tears involved in the book... Jon saying goodby to his beloved little sister, Arya... Jon saying goodby to the one person who is truely his contemporary brother, Rob, the one he grew up with... All the conversations were flat and emotionless, like watching a high school play...
The scene where the assassin comes in the room and finds Catelyn there... Lines recited like they were just going over them in a dress rehersal... "Your not supposed to be here..." FLAT! The best actor in the whole scene was the dog... The actor could have been a janitor they pulled onto the set just to fill in for the moment...
The scene with Catelyn informing her trusted few of her suspicions and her intent to go to King's landing - Everyone standing around trying to look intense and dramatic, and the lines were just rushed and flat...
Also, the way they are presenting Cat and her attitude toward Ned is all wrong... She blames him for leaving for Kings Landing - In the book she was the one who told Ned he could not refuse the king... That it would be political suicide... I do understand that some changes must be made when working within the constraints of such a project, but these people are making major changes to the characters and their motivations... I am not pleased...
I am beginning to believe that they are rushing the entire story to get it to fit into neat 30 minute packages... Its like they are telling the viewers, "Ok let's move along - We have a lot of material to cover..."
My wife actually suggested this morning that we UNsubscribe to HBO and skip the rest of the series - She was that disappointed with it last night... And I am having trouble finding a reasonable arguement against her suggestion...
I hate to dismiss your opinions completely out of hand as you're certainly entitled to them, but I don't know what show you've been watching. By television standards (and even by HBO standards, which are considerably higher than network TV), the acting has been stellar through the first two episodes. And not just in terms of line delivery - facial expressions and other non-verbal cues have been immensely effective as well. As for last night's episode, there was more genuine emotion conveyed during an hour of television than I've seen in ages (at least since the last season of Breaking Bad ended).
To be sure, there are some things to criticize, but the acting in general simply isn't one of them, IMHO. I actually agree with you somewhat about the pacing and direction, although I'm not sure this could have been avoided given the time constraints involved. If that's your main beef, the director of the first two episodes (Tim Van Patten) didn't direct any others during the season - so at least give it one more try next week before you give up.
Edited by Ser Helman Tallhart, 25 April 2011 - 10:14 AM.
#18
Posted 25 April 2011 - 10:16 AM
Solmyr, on 25 April 2011 - 09:29 AM, said:
Well, they may show it in flashback but honestly I'd be fine if they merely had him recount it. It'd be really easy for that to end up cheesy.
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That surprised me, but it makes more sense as Tallhart pointed out. Plus, it is consistent with the 'giving the mercy' stuff later on.
#19
Posted 25 April 2011 - 10:57 AM
Ser Helman Tallhart, on 25 April 2011 - 09:58 AM, said:
Visually i can see that it filmed better with the dagger and i suppose that it's hard to convey, without lengthy dialogue, what doing it with ice means.
#20
Posted 25 April 2011 - 10:59 AM
Lazarus, on 25 April 2011 - 09:55 AM, said:
and so on
I read your post a couple of times and I have to respectfully disagree. The acting seems pretty top notch so far, with Catelyn as a possible weak link depending on who you ask. It seems that whatever GRRM told these people, and what they read in the parts of the books they read, have really made an impression on their dialogue and I see a lot of subtlety and nuances that seem to be there in different ways, both to help non-readers and as Easter eggs for the book fans.







