Kalbear, on 25 April 2012 - 04:35 PM, said:
It's really not that hard to figure these things out. In particular for the dothraki it would make a bit of sense that they were less prone to rape simply because their livelihood was built around tribute from other nations. In any case, it's less a historical fact that war rape always occurred and more of something that did occur some times.
Right. And then other side of that-- tribute to a group similar to the Dothraki is more like a protection racket. Reputation is key... but, blah. I'm too groggy from catching up an all-nighter a few nights ago and really, it's not even worth arguing.
Kalbear, on 25 April 2012 - 04:35 PM, said:
Put it another way - not including the rape at all would have been less work, no?
True. And not including it wouldn't have necessarily diminished anything.
It's weird though, you know? I wrote a short that was workshopped a few years ago, and one of the more biting parts of a few critiques [there were 8 of us] from the other writers, one even being that of our guest host, were that I'd implied a rape rather than depicting the scene, like I'd lost the conviction of the telling and the integrity of the story as a whole by that singular omission. I was a little taken aback, honestly. The titular female [main] character in question was marginally 14, and the story was drafted around a couple conjoined 'tragic hero' arcs that complimented each other in offset [the other, being, her father, whom she'd deliberately brought into the conflict by endangering herself] Yet I just couldn't,
wouldn't, write that particular scene outright, even though I'd decided her strength would best be shown as weakness in her internalizing of it and making no mention of the price she paid to bring relief to the siege.
Using your reasoning, could I have revealed her innate character in a different manner, at that penultimate point of the narrative-- success, defeat, and sacrifice? Only in her death, I think, but I felt
that would have been a cop out to what I was going for. Made her heroics less, mmn, sacred or something. Going on is harder.
Now of course, I wonder. Head scratcher. Lots to think about.
Edited by JEORDHl, 25 April 2012 - 06:11 PM.