Robb and Theon, an undeveloped relationship and a writing mistake.
#1
Posted 16 May 2012 - 11:32 AM
Their relationship was interesting, what with their argument after Theon saved Bran. And let's not forget Theon's guilt over the course of the series, and how Robb featured in his thoughts of remorse.
I am of the view that not developing this relationship (as in, not giving us more conversations or page time) was one of the flaws in the series. I really think George Martin shuts the doors to way too many opportunities at good, gripping reading. This is one of them.
Now, I'm just saying, who would not want to read a scene where Robb asked Theon, "Why, Theon? Why did you do it?"
#2
Posted 16 May 2012 - 11:41 AM
#3
Posted 16 May 2012 - 11:44 AM
#4
Posted 16 May 2012 - 12:00 PM
Theon could have been taken by Ramsay to the Red Wedding, where Robb was killed before he planned to execute Theon, and then Ramsay could have taken Theon to the Dreadfort for torture.
Nothing unrealistic there. Would just provide some more epic character development.
#5
Posted 16 May 2012 - 12:17 PM
#6
Posted 16 May 2012 - 12:18 PM
#7
Posted 16 May 2012 - 12:24 PM
#8
Posted 16 May 2012 - 12:30 PM
Like I said earlier:
"Theon could have been taken by Ramsay to the Red Wedding, where Robb was killed before he planned to execute Theon, and then Ramsay could have taken Theon to the Dreadfort for torture."
That is a perfectly realistic situation under the circumstances and does not disturb the political scenario in any way.
#9
Posted 16 May 2012 - 12:34 PM
#10
Posted 16 May 2012 - 12:36 PM
#11
Posted 16 May 2012 - 12:36 PM
#12
Posted 16 May 2012 - 12:41 PM
Alric Stark, on 16 May 2012 - 12:36 PM, said:
Agreed. This is the (arguably) the most deserved punishment Theon recieves for betraying Robb.
#13
Posted 16 May 2012 - 12:41 PM
Vandalism, on 16 May 2012 - 12:30 PM, said:
Like I said earlier:
"Theon could have been taken by Ramsay to the Red Wedding, where Robb was killed before he planned to execute Theon, and then Ramsay could have taken Theon to the Dreadfort for torture."
That is a perfectly realistic situation under the circumstances and does not disturb the political scenario in any way.
Getting through Moat Cailin might have been a problem, Ramsey giving up his Reek unrealistic, Robb not executing Ramsey unlikely, Theon confessing to Robb that the Starks are alive very likely.
I imagine your OP to be very soap opera, you are my best friend and you look after my brothers so well, you would never do anything to hurt me, my home is your home etc.
#14
Posted 16 May 2012 - 12:47 PM
Vandalism, on 16 May 2012 - 12:30 PM, said:
"Theon could have been taken by Ramsay to the Red Wedding, where Robb was killed before he planned to execute Theon, and then Ramsay could have taken Theon to the Dreadfort for torture."
That is a perfectly realistic situation under the circumstances and does not disturb the political scenario in any way.
And if Martin had revealed, in ASoS, that Theon was alive and flaying (as it were), there would be no suspense whatsoever as to who "Reek" was in ADwD. Yes, one ought to be able to conclude that it is Theon before his first chapter ends, but that is, nevertheless, different than knowing already.
#15
Posted 16 May 2012 - 12:55 PM
#16
Posted 16 May 2012 - 12:59 PM
Tumnas the Torpid, on 16 May 2012 - 12:47 PM, said:
#17
Posted 16 May 2012 - 01:00 PM
#19
Posted 16 May 2012 - 01:10 PM
I feel Martin has FAR too many emotional loose ends in his story.
Like Jon never getting to face Catelyn when his true identity becomes known, so that all the years of unresolved antagonism can finally have an ''aha'' moment.
Like none of the Starks ever getting to kill Joffrey personally for beheading Eddard.
Like most of the people on Arya's list dying off without her involvement.
Like Roose Bolton potentially being defeated by Stannis instead of by one of Robb's brothers.
I can go on and on.
Basically, the lack of cathartic moments is what I dislike in this series.
Robb facing up to Theon would have been one such example.
#20
Posted 16 May 2012 - 01:12 PM
Then the readers can have an answer but Robb can still die at the RW.
Case closed lol.







