The first paragraph: Not all bastards are baseborn, whilst this is later corrected, it should be consistant throughout.
Fathers cannot legitimise bastards, only a king may do so. Ramsay becomes a Bolton, because Tommen declares him so. Regards to Jon Snow, there is a difference between Legitimising and entering succession. eg. Daemon was legitimised, but was generally believed (made official by the victors) to not be in the line of succession.
As regards to arms, a difference I feel should be made between adding a detail (a red bar sinister) and this being a specific thing that bastards add.
I would have added this to the discussion page, but you need to be a member. I don't mean to sound too pedantic, it just niggles at me. If you spot any more/disagree with my views, don't hesitate to post.
(edited for grammar)
Edited by The BlackBear, 15 July 2012 - 05:11 PM.