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Hello, it has been a long time since I posted my theory on Davos after being thrown from the Blackwater explosion. Thank you for at least having a story line opinion on the subject. These other people don't understand that GRRM's description is that Davos was knocked out, not knocked off the boat to swim away.

Did they ever tell you why the F--- your thread wasn't approved, it's because the MODS are paid to be pious pruds..

Did they ever tell you why the F--- your thread wasn't approved, it's because they MODS are paid to be pious pruds by Elio and Linda.

In dialogue of MG: suggested edit-the Goddess (turned) use (abandoned) as a stronger verb.----In later Owen para-change (waters) to (tides)if wanting to use that description----Halfway through Owen speaks- Use New Para for MG's "fist smashed"---With brake of scene lead off w/ name not pronoun(him)-- It seemed well established to start a world and story, Kudos. ---Note these messages are backwards because every time I it enter it posts.---Please, it or when you get this could you r...

I liked the potion concept of creating a new soul, although it looks like you aren't using it. My ? is how do they know the engeneering results w/out experimentation. Using that posion (storyline) you can go w/ the concept tha tit turns the users into just a soul-timeless but not existant to the world of flesh, or a soul to a seperate/parallel universe-perhaps the Undying sphere- my imaginative thought from the early text.

I read the prologue you had a link to, and her are my suggestions/thoughts. My initial responce is noticing/editing redundacies. For Ex: Para1 combine sentence 2&3. The decaying rays cast sullen shadows of cruel, unforgiving silouettes through the arched windows, marrying...as is---Para 2 Delet "In his arms" -it's understood by carried. Owen carried a bound scroll, faded and stained with age from teh years men....as is.

Hello, this is responce to your Borders pot from April, every time I try to use a quote from someone it doesn't come up/work.