Lady Blackfish Posted November 16, 2008 Share Posted November 16, 2008 [quote name='Maester Yobjascz' post='1589485' date='Nov 14 2008, 16.27']This was my old chapter break-down for AGoT: <snip>[/quote] I'm a little confused about one thing: shouldn't Jon III come after Bran III? Bran wakes up in Bran III and Jon gets word of that in Jon III, so it can't come in the order you have it, can it? What if you moved Cat III to episode 2 and Jon III to episode 4? I might also move Ned II to episode 3, since they discuss Dany's wedding in it. It might make more sense to have that discussion take place in the episode where Dany actually gets married, to convey the time it would take for the information to reach them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maester Yobjascz Posted November 16, 2008 Share Posted November 16, 2008 Lady Blackfish - you're absolutely right. I haven't taken a close look at these outlines in almost two years now... :dunce: I'll have to spend some time trying to figure that out. Unfortunately, it's hard to just switch Catelyn III and Jon III. Jon III works really well as the end of an episode. However, it's going to be a bit of a letdown if it follows Bran's dream/awakening. And pushing Jon III back another episode causes more timing problems. That said, I had rearranged the later episodes: Episode 10 12 Jon VII 12 Wights, Ghost, Fire 27 Tyrion VIII 15 Green Fork, Bolton 38 Catelyn IX 11 Freys, Negotiations 44 Catelyn X 6 Whispering Wood, Jaime 52 Dany VII 8 Mirri, Drogo injured, healing Episode 11 10 Jon VIII 10 Aemon, Pain, Choice 17 Eddard XV 7 Varys, Honor, ToJ 28 Dany VIII 11 Drogo worse, blood magic 38 Arya V 10 Flea Bottom, Beheading, Yoren 48 Jon IX 10 Oaths broken, oaths kept Episode 12 9 Bran VII 9 Dreams, Crypt, Eddard 16 Sansa VI 7 Crying, Joffrey, Heads, Sandor 23 Tyrion IX 7 Tywin, Hand 31 Dany IX 8 Results, Rhaego, Drogo, Death 41 Catelyn XI 10 Riverrun, King in the North 49 Dany X 8 Pyre, Blood magic, Dragons Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maester Yobjascz Posted November 17, 2008 Share Posted November 17, 2008 Thank you Lady Blackfish for pointing out a chronological issue with that last timeline. It's taken me a few hours of sitting and staring and trying different options before I settled on a solution. There are still a few rough patches where it might be worth re-arranging chapters within an episode, but I think this episode layout works pretty well. Ep. Total Chap. Ct. Summary 1 10 Prologue 10 Others 16 Bran I 6 Beheading, Direwolves 20 Catelyn I 4 Starks, History, Arryn, Robert 27 Eddard I 7 Robert, Crypts 34 Jon I 7 Feast, Benjen, Tyrion 41 Catelyn II 7 Sex, Lysa, Decisions 47 Arya I 6 Needlework, Jon, Words 54 Bran II 7 Climbing, Thrown 2 4 Tyrion I 4 Reading, Family 8 Jon II 4 Catelyn, Goodbyes 15 Eddard II 7 Riding, Robert, Dany 24 Dany I 9 History, Drogo, Jorah 35 Sansa I 11 Joffrey, Arya, Attack 40 Eddard III 5 Arya, Lannisters, Lady 49 Eddard IV 9 Arrival, Brothel, Catelyn, Petyr 3 9 Catelyn III 9 Assassination, Wolves 18 Catelyn IV 9 Sailing, Petyr, Knife 25 Tyrion II 7 Travel, Jon, Night's Watch 32 Eddard V 7 Investigations 42 Eddard VI 10 Investigations, Gendry 50 Dany II 8 Wedding, Sex 4 3 Bran III 3 Dream, 3-eyed Crow 14 Jon III 11 Training, Noye, Thorne 22 Arya II 8 Needlework, Needle, Syrio 31 Sansa II 9 Tournament 48 Eddard VII 17 Tournament, Ser Hugh 5 9 Tyrion III 9 Dinner, Jeor, Jon 18 Dany III 9 Dothraki Sea, Viserys, Pregnant 27 Bran IV 9 Frustration, Tyrion, Riding 35 Jon IV 8 Training, Tarly 41 Eddard VIII 6 Argument, Resign, Brothel 48 Catelyn V 7 Returning, Tyrion 6 9 Arya III 9 Cats, Treachery 19 Dany IV 10 Vaes Dothrak arrival, Viserys, Jorah 28 Tyrion IV 9 High Road, Bronn 31 Eddard IX 3 Barra, Jaime, Conflict 46 Catelyn VI 15 Vale, Brynden, Eyrie 51 Eddard X 5 Recovery, Handship, the Hunt 7 8 Bran V 8 Riding, Wildlings, Osha 14 Jon V 6 Promotion, Aemon/Sam 26 Tyrion V 12 Sky Cells, Admissions of Guilt 36 Catelyn VII 10 Trial by Combat 45 Dany V 9 Stallion Heart, Viserys Crown 51 Jon VI 6 Vows, Ghost, Hand 8 7 Eddard XI 7 Gregor, Beric 13 Sansa III 6 Beric, Old drunk King 20 Eddard XII 7 Pycelle, Cersei, Godswood 30 Eddard XIII 10 Robert, Baelish, Plotting 35 Eddard XIV 5 Decision, Betrayal, Baelish 44 Arya IV 9 Syrio, Trant, Escape 52 Sansa IV 8 Cersei, Poole, Watching 9 9 Dany VI 9 Assassination, Drogo, Westeros 16 Tyrion VI 7 Tysha, Clansmen 27 Bran VI 11 Banners Called, Robb 35 Tyrion VII 8 Unite with Tywin, War Plans 43 Catelyn VIII 8 Robb, War plans 50 Sansa V 7 Beg for Eddard 10 12 Jon VII 12 Wights, Ghost, Fire 27 Tyrion VIII 15 Green Fork, Bolton 38 Catelyn IX 11 Freys, Negotiations 44 Catelyn X 6 Whispering Wood, Jaime 52 Dany VII 8 Mirri, Drogo injured, healing 11 10 Jon VIII 10 Aemon, Pain, Choice 17 Eddard XV 7 Varys, Honor, ToJ 28 Dany VIII 11 Drogo worse, blood magic 38 Arya V 10 Flea Bottom, Beheading, Yoren 48 Jon IX 10 Oaths broken, oaths kept 12 9 Bran VII 9 Dreams, Crypt, Eddard 16 Sansa VI 7 Crying, Joffrey, Heads, Sandor 23 Tyrion IX 7 Tywin, Hand 31 Dany IX 8 Results, Rhaego, Drogo, Death 41 Catelyn XI 10 Riverrun, King in the North 49 Dany X 8 Pyre, Blood magic, Dragons Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Padraig Posted November 18, 2008 Share Posted November 18, 2008 Wow. Amazing work. [quote]And it might also be difficult to fit as many as five or six plot strands that take place in different regions of the world into one episode.[/quote] The Wire did it. Ok, they were all in the same city but the characters had their set world they lived in, with limited reaction out of it. 1 or 2 characters may play a more central role in an episode, but that would be an interesting balanacing act since you'd want to avoid ignoring others completely (in general). With all these cliffhangers, you can't skip characters in the next episode. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smoldering Hound Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 So I'll agree with the first episode... But as for the second and third... Ed 4 can't come before cat 4, it doesn't make sense....too "flashbacky". On the other hand, It's perfectly ok to introduce Dany at the beginning of episode 2, and both dany 1 and 2 really aught to be in the same episode, so I see episode 2 as: 2 Dany I 9 History, Drogo, Jorah Tyrion I 4 Reading, Family Jon II 4 Catelyn, Goodbyes Dany II 8 Wedding, Sex Eddard II 7 Riding, Robert, Dany Sansa I 11 Joffrey, Arya, Attack Eddard III 5 Arya, Lannisters, Lady Ends with Lady's execution (which may just get shown), which continues to set the tone of the series: Leaving episode 3 as: 9 Catelyn III 9 Assassination, Wolves 18 Catelyn IV 9 Sailing, Petyr, Knife 27 Eddard IV 9 Arrival, Brothel, Catelyn, Petyr 34 Tyrion II 7 Travel, Jon, Night's Watch 41 Eddard V 7 Investigations 51 Eddard VI 10 Investigations, Gendry Ugh... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smoldering Hound Posted November 22, 2008 Share Posted November 22, 2008 Did some preliminary work on adding the chapters that a particular chapter is contingent on, and when this version of the schedule is skipping episodes...be finishing later. 1 10 Prologue 10 Others 16 Bran I 6 Beheading, Direwolves Prologue-> 20 Catelyn I 4 Starks, History, Arryn, Robert Bran 1-> 27 Eddard I 7 Robert, Crypts CAT 1-> -DANY 1 skipped 34 Jon I 7 Feast, Benjen, Tyrion EDD 1-> 41 Catelyn II 7 Sex, Lysa, Decisions JON 1-> 47 Arya I 6 Needlework, Jon, Words CAT 2-> 54 Bran II 7 Climbing, Thrown CAT 2-> 2 4 Tyrion I 4 Reading, Family BRAN 2-> 8 Jon II 4 Catelyn, Goodbyes ARYA 1, BRAN 2-> 15 Eddard II 7 Riding, Robert, Dany TYRION 1,DANY 1-> -DANY 2 skipped 24 Dany I 9 History, Drogo, Jorah +DANY 1 in 35 Sansa I 11 Joffrey, Arya, Attack EDD 2-> -Tyrion 2, CAT 3 skipped 40 Eddard III 5 Arya, Lannisters, Lady SANSA 1 -> 49 Eddard IV 9 Arrival, Brothel, Catelyn, Petyr BRAN 3-> EDDARD 3,CAT 4-> -BRAN 3 CAT 4, JON 3 skipped 3 9 Catelyn III 9 Assassination, Wolves JON 2-> +CAT 3 18 Catelyn IV 9 Sailing, Petyr, Knife CAT 3-> +CAT 4 25 Tyrion II 7 Travel, Jon, Night's Watch JON 2-> +TYRION 2 32 Eddard V 7 Investigations BRAN 3, EDD 4-> -TYRION3,ARYA 2,DANY3,BRAN 4 SKIPPED 42 Eddard VI 10 Investigations, Gendry EDD 5 -JON 4 50 Dany II 8 Wedding, Sex DANY 1-> +DANY 2 4 3 Bran III 3 Dream, 3-eyed Crow CAT 3-> +BRAN 3 14 Jon III 11 Training, Noye, Thorne TYRION 2, CAT 4-> +JON 3 22 Arya II 8 Needlework, Needle, Syrio EDD 4-> +ARYA 2 31 Sansa II 9 Tournament ARYA 2, EDD 6-> -CAT 5 48 Eddard VII 17 Tournament, Ser Hugh SANSA 2-> 5 9 Tyrion III 9 Dinner, Jeor, Jon JON 3=> +TYRION 3 18 Dany III 9 Dothraki Sea, Viserys, Pregnant DANY 2-> +DANY 3 27 Bran IV 9 Frustration, Tyrion, Riding TYRION 3, BRAN 3-> +BRAN 4 35 Jon IV 8 Training, Tarly TYRION 3-> +JON 4 41 Eddard VIII 6 Argument, Resign, Brothel EDD 7, DANY 3-> -TYRION 4, ARYA 3 48 Catelyn V 7 Returning, Tyrion TYRION 3, EDD 4-> +CAT 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyro Lannister Posted November 23, 2008 Share Posted November 23, 2008 [quote name='Maester Yobjascz' post='1591250' date='Nov 17 2008, 18.15']7 8 Bran V 8 Riding, Wildlings, Osha 14 Jon V 6 Promotion, Aemon/Sam 26 Tyrion V 12 Sky Cells, Admissions of Guilt 36 Catelyn VII 10 Trial by Combat [b]45 Dany V 9 Stallion Heart, Viserys Crown[/b] 51 Jon VI 6 Vows, Ghost, Hand 8 7 Eddard XI 7 Gregor, Beric 13 Sansa III 6 Beric, Old drunk King 20 Eddard XII 7 Pycelle, Cersei, Godswood 30 Eddard XIII 10 Robert, Baelish, Plotting [b]35 Eddard XIV 5 Decision, Betrayal, Baelish[/b] 44 Arya IV 9 Syrio, Trant, Escape 52 Sansa IV 8 Cersei, Poole, Watching[/quote] I always thought it would be awesome if we went from Viserys receiving his golden crown, as he screams and dies, we then switch to KL, Pycelle tells Ned "The King is dead", very cool IMO. Then Eddard assembles the council, they go to see Joffrey, and the episode ends with Eddards men dying and Petyr saying "I warned you not to trust me". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maester Yobjascz Posted November 23, 2008 Share Posted November 23, 2008 [quote]I always thought it would be awesome if we went from Viserys receiving his golden crown, as he screams and dies, we then switch to KL, Pycelle tells Ned "The King is dead", very cool IMO. Then Eddard assembles the council, they go to see Joffrey, and the episode ends with Eddards men dying and Petyr saying "I warned you not to trust me".[/quote] That is a pretty cool idea. I'm just not sure that things can be rearranged to make it work. This is, of course, all based on an admittedly abstract method for calculating episode times. I'll have to play around with it and see if it could work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjen Stark Posted November 24, 2008 Share Posted November 24, 2008 [quote name='Maester Yobjascz' post='1598178' date='Nov 23 2008, 12.46']That is a pretty cool idea. I'm just not sure that things can be rearranged to make it work. This is, of course, all based on an admittedly abstract method for calculating episode times. I'll have to play around with it and see if it could work.[/quote] Why not? Dany chapters can go in almost anywhere after their spot in the book. The only Dany events dependent upon the rest of the events include attempts to kill her and general commentary in the Small Council. Plus asides about Dany could easily be added and subtracted as needed throughout the series. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smoldering Hound Posted November 26, 2008 Share Posted November 26, 2008 [quote]2 9 Dany I 9 History, Drogo, Jorah 13 Tyrion I 4 Reading, Family 17 Jon II 4 Catelyn, Goodbyes 25 Dany II 8 Wedding, Sex 32 Eddard II 7 Riding, Robert, Dany 43 Sansa I 11 Joffrey, Arya, Attack 48 Eddard III 5 Arya, Lannisters, Lady Ends with Lady's execution (which may just get shown), which continues to set the tone of the series:[/quote] After rereading Sansa 1 and Edd 3, I'm seeing that sansa 1 ends with a cliffhanger making edd 3 good to be in a separate episode. Also good because any possible replacement is going to be longer. So lets add tyrion 2. 9 Dany I 9 History, Drogo, Jorah 13 Tyrion I 4 Reading, Family 17 Jon II 4 Catelyn, Goodbyes 25 Dany II 8 Wedding, Sex 32 Eddard II 7 Riding, Robert, Dany 39 Tyrion II 7 Travel, Jon, Night's Watch 50 Sansa I 11 Joffrey, Arya, Attack Leaving episode 3 as: 9 Cat III 9 Assassination, Wolves 14 Edd III 5 Arya, Lannisters, Lady 23 Catelyn IV 9 Sailing, Petyr, Knife 32 Eddard IV 9 Arrival, Brothel, Catelyn, Petyr 39 Eddard V 7 Investigations 49 Eddard VI 10 Investigations, Gendry Still ugh, but edd 4 completes both the cat to kings landing and edd to kings landing story arcs, so we can steal from later episodes to replace edd 5 and 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smoldering Hound Posted November 26, 2008 Share Posted November 26, 2008 [font="Courier New"]So I've broken down the chapter contingencies into 5 threads The North is the wall Winterfell is primarily Bran. Mystery is the Ned investigations and fallout thread. WAR is the lanisters and starks fighting (mostly cat and tyrion) East is dany. Phear my ascii fu. ............... means info from that chap is relayed to the lower chapter Notes shorthand * means shock in the chapter (aka plot twists, aka awesomeness) X means action in the chapter (fights) x means the fighting is MINOR $ means nudity/sex in the chapter (or at least the potential) |#- means minor story arc starts here -#| means minor story arc ends here O means talking heads/exposition ! means character death ~ means dream/flashback ^ means aftermath/epilogue/recap @ means scenery (castles) Minor arcs 1)intro arc 2)Visceris plots and gets his crown 3)Tyrion controls his own destiny 4)Jon becomes a Knight 5)Eddard goes to Kingsguard 6)Cat goes to kingsguard 7)Eddard investigates Jon's murder 8)Cat Brings Tyrion to "justice" 9)Tyrion raises an army of clansmen 10)Ned plays and loses at the Game of Thrones 11)Jon becomes a man 12)Robb goes to war 13)Dany hatches dragons NORTH=======WINTERFELL==MYSTERY=======WAR=========EAST=====Notes Prologue____===============================================X!!@ Enter Others @the wall ============BRAN 1=========================================O!@ |1- Enter Stark Crew, Ice @Winterfell ============CAT 1==========================================O Enter Cat ==============|=========================..........DANY 1===O|2- Enter Eastern crew, Drogo @Pentos ============EDDARD 1===================.============|======O~Enter Lannisters, King, Sandor ~tower of joy ============JON 1=====================.=============|======O Enter Benjen, Meet Jon ============CAT 2====================.==============|======O$ $both nude ============ARYA 1==================.===============|======xO Meet Arya ============BRAN 2=================.================|======* -1| * Yes, in this story, we cripple kids. ============TYRION 1==============.=================|======O^|3- ==========__JON 2______==========.==================|======O|4- =========/====|========\========..................DANY 2===$X@! Enter Dany's girls, Dragon eggs $Dany's first time @Khal camp ========/=====|=========EDDARD 2====================|======|5- (...Dany wedding) TYRION 2======|============|========================|======O Enter Dragonlore ==|=========CAT 3__________|_______=================|======O|6- Enter Dagger ==|===========|=========SANSA 1====\================|======Ox@ cliffhanger Enter Ilyn Payne, Barristan, Renly @Ruby Ford ==|===========|=========EDDARD 3====\===============|======O! ==|===......BRAN 3=========|=========\==============|======~^ crow dream ==|==.========|============|=====_____CAT 4=========|======O@ Enter Littlefinger, Varys Meet Rodrick @Kings Landing JON 3=========|============|====/===================|======Ox(bran is alive) Goodbye Benjen? Enter Jon's crew, Ser Thorne ==|===========|=========EDDARD 4_===================|======O$ -5| -6| Enter Pycelle $Brothel TYRION 3__====|============|=====\==================|======O Enter Lord Captain Mormont ==|=======\===|=========ARYA 2====\=================|======Ox Enter Syrio ==|========\==|============|=======\====..........DANY 3===Ox$~ $Drogo every night ~montage ==|=========BRAN 4_________|_______=\==.============|======O Enter Hodor ==|===========|=========EDDARD 5===\=\.=============|======O |7- JON 4=========|============|========\.\=============|======Ox enter Sam ==|===========|=========EDDARD 6====.\=\============|======O Enter Gendry ==|===========|============|=======.==CAT 5=========|======* |8- Cliffhanger Enter Marillon, Bronn @THE INN * Did she really just do that? ==|===========|=========SANSA 2===.==.==|===========|======X! X Tournament Enter the Mountain, Beric, Thoros, Jalabar Xho, Loras ==|===========|=========EDDARD 7=.==.===|===========|======XO X Tournament Finale ==|===========|============|==...==.==TYRION 4======|======XO! X Mountain Clans ==|===========|=========ARYA 3====.=====|===========|======O (...Dany pregnant) ==|===========|=========EDDARD 8...=====|===========|======O ==|===========|============|====.==.==CAT 6=========|======O$@ Enter Blackfish, Mya, Lysa and Rob $breastfeeding @the Gate, Vale, Eyrie ==|===========|====.....EDDARD 9=.==.===|===========|======O$X cliffhanger $brothel X street fight (...Tyrion's capture) ==|===========|===.========|======.==...|.........DANY 4===0x@ @Vaes Dothrak (...Can't have Mormont assassinate here) ==|=========BRAN 5=========|=======.====|===========|======OX X Enter Osha (...Jory dead) ==|===========|============|=======.==TYRION 5======|======0@ cliffhanger @Sky cells ==|===========|=========EDDARD 10==.====|===========|======O~ ~Tower of joy ==|===========|============|=======.==CAT 7=========|======OX! -8| X BRONN Saves Tyrion JON 5=========|============|=======.=/==|===========|======O Enter Maester Aemon ==|===========|============|=======./=TYRION 6======|======O |9- Enter Shagga and crew ==|===========|=========EDDARD 11==/.========|======|======O^ ^Rounding up a Posse ==|===========|=========SANSA 3===|==.=======|======|======O^ ^Time to pack up and Ned Figures it out. ==|===========|=========EDDARD 12=|===.......|======|======O -7|* * Did he really just do that? ==|===========|============|======|==========|====DANY 5===OX! -2|* X* Visc gets crowned ==|===========|=========EDDARD 13.|.........=|.=====|======O |10- JON 6=========|============|======|=========.|=.====|======O -4| Cliffhanger ==|====.......|.........EDDARD 14=|==========|==.===|======OX!* X* "I did warn you not to trust me" ==|===.=======|=========ARYA 4====|==========|.==.==|======X!~ X Arya's first kill, Syrio schools Lannisters ~Crypt Flashback ==|==.========|====.....SANSA 4===|==========|=.==.=|======O (Sansa sends letters...) JON 7=========|===.========|======.\=========|==.==.|======OX |11- X fight with wights in Lord Mormont's tower (...Edd in jail) ==|=========BRAN 6=========|======.=\=BRAN 6=|===.==|======O |12- Enter Roose Bolton, Robet Glover, Maege Mormont, Greatjon Umber ==|===========|============|======.==\==|====|====DANY 6===OX^ X Mormont vs Wine Seller ^(...Assassination sent and rescinded) ==|===========|============|======.===CAT 8==|======|======O@^ Enter Wylis and Wendel @Moat Cailin ^War news ==|===========|============|======.===TYRION 7======|======O Enter Tywin, Kevin Lannister ==|====.......|.........SANSA 5==.======|===========|======O ==|===.=======|=========EDDARD 15=======|===========|======O~ (...The Imp beat the rap) ~flashback harrenhal, tower of joy ==|==.========|============|==========CAT 9=========|======O@ @Twins Enter Walder Frey JON 8=========|============|============|===========|======O Enter Longclaw (...Selmy removed from Kingsguard) ==|===========|============|============|=========DANY 7===O$x! |13- $rape xBattle Aftermath Enter Maegi Mirri Maz Dur ==|===========|============|==========TYRION 8======|======O$X! $Enter Shae XBattle of Green Fork ==|===========|============|==========CAT 10========|======OX X Battle of Whispering Woods ==|===========|============|============|=========DANY 8===OX~ cliffhanger X Chaos via "he fell off his horse" ~red magic ==|===========|===.......ARYA 5....=====|===========|======OX!*^ -10| X Ned confesses ^Arya goes with Yoren (Who's dead..) ==|=========BRAN 7==.======.=====.=.====|===========|======O~^ ~Ned's in the crypt ^Green Dreams Sux0r ==|================.=====SANSA 6==.=.===|===========|======O^ ^Sansa is alone ==|===.............================.=.==|=========DANY 9===O!~ Exit Drogo ~red magic ==|==.==============================.=TYRION 9======|======O^ -9| ^Tyrion is the new hand JON 9================================.==|===========|======O^ -11| ^Jon stays at the wall ======================================CAT 11========|======O@^ -12| @Riverrun ^Rob is King in the North ==================================================DANY 10==O^* -13| ^Dany has dragons[/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Argus Eyes Posted November 27, 2008 Share Posted November 27, 2008 One of the things that the POV from the books made great. Was due to the fact certain characters never spoke out them selfs. Both Rob Stark and Tywin Lannister became bigger than life, because you never got to know what they where thinking or doing untill it was done. Because Catlyn, Jamie, Tyrion spoke about them or thought about them, they became flawless generals/sceemers while infact both wheren't. I think there is quite a challenge in positioning them in a TV series. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smoldering Hound Posted December 1, 2008 Share Posted December 1, 2008 [font="Courier New"]Proof I have too much time on my hands. Pages and total pages are based on the 807 page paperback 1===========RP=RSP==AP=ATP=Notes Prologue====12===1==10==10=X!!@ Enter Others @the Wall? Prologue.1)(p1)Ext. snowy woods. twilight. 6p GARED..................6p 15lines, horse riding SIR WAYMAR ROYCE.......6p 23lines, horse riding WILL...................6p 13 lines, horse riding Prologue.2)(p7) Ext Wildling Camp, Night 3 1/4p0 WAYMAR.................3 1/4p 9 lines, sword fighting, death WILL...................3 1/4p 1 line FIGHTING OTHER.........2 1/4p 0 lines sword fighting OTHERS.................2 1/4p 0 lines, sfx OTHER armor Prologue.3)(p10) Ext wildling camp, Night 3/4p WAYMAR.................3/4p 0 lines, fight, sfx makeup WILL...................3/4p 0 lines, fight, death Prologue totals:.......10p 59 lines Swordfight, Other armor, horses GARED...................6p 13 lines SKILLS horse riding WILL...................10p 14 lines SKILLS horse riding SIR WAYMAR ROYCE.......10p 32 lines horse, sword fight Extras 1 OTHER sword fighting..2 1/4p 5 OTHERS................2 1/4p BRAN 1=======9==13===8==18=O!@ |1- Enter Stark Crew, Ice @Winterfell BRAN 1.1)(p13) Ext town square snow 2p GARED....................2p 0 lines beheaded BRAN.....................2p 0 lines horse riding JON......................2p 3 lines horse riding ROBB.....................2p 0 lines horse riding EDDARD...................2p 1 line horse riding, sword use (execution) THEON....................2p 0 lines sfx kicks head JORY.....................2p 0 lines EXTRAS DESMOND HULLEN HARWIN GUARD 1 GUARD 2 Townspeople (sparse crowd) (9 mounted guard extras) SFX Gared head BRAN 1.2)(p15) Ext Traveling on road to bridge snow 1 5/8p BRAN....................1 5/8p 4 lines horse riding JON.......................3/4p 3 lines horse riding ROBB......................5/8p 2 lines horse riding EDDARD..................1 5/8p 6 lines horse riding (ICE: Valerian steel 2 handed sword) JORY....................1/8p 1 line horse riding EXTRAS THEON DESMOND HULLEN HARWIN GUARD 1 GUARD 2 (9 mounted guard extras) BRAN 1.3)(p17) Ext river bank knee deep snow 4 1/8p BRAN....................4 1/8p 4 lines horse riding SFX holds pup JON.....................4 1/8p 10 lines horse riding SFX dog handling ROBB....................4 1/8p 9 lines horse riding SFX dog handling EDDARD..................4 1/8p 11 lines horse riding THEON...................4 1/8p 5 lines horse riding JORY....................4 1/8p 3 line horse riding HULLEN..................4 1/8p 3 line horse riding HARWIN..................4 1/8p 1 line horse riding GUARD 1.................4 1/8p 1 line horse riding EXTRAS DESMOND (9 mounted guard extras) SFX Dead Direwolf, 5 wolf pups, 1 albino wolf pup BRAN 1 Totals:.....7 3/4p 67 lines Beheading, Direwolves, horses GARED .............2 p 0 lines SFX beheaded Could be done with an extra, with only the head matching.... BRAN...............7 3/4p 8 lines horse riding SFX holds pup JON................6 7/8p 16 lines horse riding SFX dog handling ROBB...............7 p 11 lines horse riding SFX dog handling EDDARD ............7 3/4p 18 lines horse riding (ICE) THEON..............7 3/4p 5 lines horse riding JORY ..............7 3/4p 4 lines horse riding HULLEN.............7 3/4p 3 lines horse riding HARWIN.............7 3/4p 1 line horse riding GUARD 1............7 3/4p 1 line horse riding EXTRAS 7 3/4p DESMOND horse, GUARD 2 horse (9 mounted guard extras) CAT 1========6==22===5==23=O Enter Cat CAT 1.1)(p22) 6 1/8 pages Ext(?) Enclosed Godswood, open sky. CATELYN..............6 1/8p 19 lines EDDARD...............6 1/8p 19 lines (ICE) CAT 1 Totals.........6 1/8p 38 lines CATELYN..............6 1/8p 19 lines EDDARD...............6 1/8p 19 lines Cut DANY 1 EDDARD 1====10==39===9==32=O~Enter Lannisters, King, Sandor ~tower of joy EDDARD 1.1)(p39) 1 5/8 pages Ext Winterfell Gate ROBERT..............1 5/8p 1 line horse EDDARD..............1 5/8p 1 line CERCEI..............1 5/8 1 line extras on horse JAIME SANDOR JOFFREY TYRION MERYN BOROS crowd of retainers on foot MYRCELLA TOMMEN CATELYN ROBB SANSA ARYA BRAN RICKON EDDARD 1.2)(p41) 2 3/4 pages int crypt ROBERT.................2 3/4p 7 lines EDDARD.................2 3/4p 8 lines EDDARD 1.3)(p43) 1/4 page int tower of joy YOUNG EDDARD...........1/4p 0 lines HOWLAND REED...........1/4p 0 lines LYANNA.................1/4p 1 line EDDARD 1.4)(p44) 1/8p Int. crypt ROBERT.................1/8p 2 lines EDDARD.................1/8p 2 lines skip eddard 1.5 (p44) 1/4p ext ruby ford flashback EDDARD 1.6)(p44)4 3/8p Int. crypt ROBERT...............4 3/8p 20 lines EDDARD...............4 3/8p 17 lines EDDARD 1 totals......9 1/8p 60 lines ROBERT...............8 7/8p 30 lines horse EDDARD...............8 7/8p 28 lines CERCEI...............1 5/8p 1 line LYANNA...............0 1/4p 1 lines YOUNG EDDARD.........1/4p 0 lines HOWLAND REED.........1/4p 0 lines extras 1 5/8P on horse JAIME SANDOR JOFFREY TYRION MERWYN MOROS crowd of retainers on foot MYRCELLA TOMMEN CATELYN ROBB SANSA ARYA BRAN RICKON JON 1========9==49===8==40=O Enter Benjen, Meet Jon JON 1.1)(p49)6p Int great hall of Winterfell JON....................6p 16 lines sfx ghost interaction BENJEN.................3p 15 lines Extras MANCE RAYDER harp bench of younger squires EDDARD ROBERT CERCEI MYRCELLA TOMMEN CATELYN ROBB SANSA ARYA BRAN RICKON JOFFREY JAIME THEON TYRION SFX/ANIMALS GHOST DOGS dogfight JON 1.2)(p55)2p Ext Winterfell courtyard JON SNOW..........2p 11 lines sfx ghost interaction TYRION............2p 15 lines tumbling SFX GHOST JON 1 totals......8p 46 lines JON...............8p 16 lines sfx ghost interaction BENJEN............3p 15 lines TYRION............2p 15 lines tumbling Extras 6P MANCE RAYDER harp bench of younger squires EDDARD ROBERT CERCEI MYRCELLA TOMMEN CATELYN ROBB SANSA ARYA BRAN RICKON JOFFREY JAIME THEON TYRION SFX/ANIMALS GHOST DOGS dogfight CAT 2=======10==58===9==49=O$ $both nude CAT 2.1)(p58) 7 7/8p Int Catelyn's Chambers CATELYN....................7 7/8p 30 lines nudity, short sex scene EDDARD.....................7 7/8p 39 lines nudity, short Sex scene MAESTER LUWIN..............5 5/8p 15 lines DESMOND....................0p 2 lines (eliminate jon parentage 1 1/8 page) CAT 2 totals.........7 7/8p 86 lines nudity, sex CATELYN..............7 7/8p 30 lines nudity, short sex scene EDDARD...............7 7/8p 39 lines nudity, short Sex scene MAESTER LUWIN........5 5/8p 15 lines DESMOND..............0 p 2 lines ARYA 1=======8==68===7==56=xO Meet Arya ARYA 1.1)(p68) 2 1/4 Pages Int ladies study, winterfell ARYA..........................2 1/4p 7 lines SANSA.........................2 1/4p 4 lines JEYNE POOLE...................2 1/4p 1 line BETH CASSEL...................2 1/4p 1 line MYRCELLA......................2 1/4p 0 lines SEPTA MORDANE.................2 1/4p 5 lines ARYA 1.2)(p70) 1 page int guardroom ARYA.....................1p 1 line sfx interact with NYMERIA SFX NYMERIA ARYA 1.3)(p71) 4 pages Ext bridge window overlooking Winterfell sword practice yard ARYA.....................4p 7 lines interact w/ NYMERIA JON......................4p 13 lines interact w/ GHOST BRAN.....................3 1/8p 0 lines wooden swordplay TOMMEN...................3 1/8p 0 lines wooden swordplay SER RODRIK CASSEL........3 1/8p 6 lines ROBB.....................3 1/8p 5 lines THEON....................3 1/8p 1 line JOFFREY..................3 1/8p 6 lines SANDOR...................3 1/8p 4 lines extras dozen spectators SFX NYMERIA and GHOST interacting Skip 1/8 page arya's room. ARYA 1 totals..........7 1/4p 53 lines ARYA...................7 1/4p 7 lines direwolf interact SANSA..................2 1/4p 4 lines JEYNE POOLE............2 1/4p 1 line BETH CASSEL............2 1/4p 1 line MYRCELLA...............2 1/4p 0 lines SEPTA MORDANE..........2 1/4p 5 lines JON....................4 p 13 lines direwolf interact BRAN...................3 1/8p 0 lines wooden swordplay TOMMEN.................3 1/8p 0 lines wooden swordplay SER RODRIK CASSEL......3 1/8p 6 lines ROBB...................3 1/8p 5 lines THEON..................3 1/8p 1 line JOFFREY................3 1/8p 6 lines SANDOR.................3 1/8p 4 lines extras 4p dozen spectators SFX direwolves BRAN 2======10==96===9==65=* -1| * Yes, in this story, we cripple kids. BRAN 2.1)(p76)1/8p Ext Winterfell gate the hunt rides out Extras: BRAN on Horse: ROBERT ROBB JOFFREY BENJEN JORY THEON RODRIK TYRION BRAN 2.2)(P78)7/8p Ext Godswood, Winterfell BRAN.............7/8p 2 lines interact w/SUMMER SFX SUMMER not fetching sticks Skip flashback on page 80 BRAN 2.3)(p79)2p Ext Winterfell rooftops BRAN..............2p 0 lines BRAN 2.4)(p82) 2 1/4p Ext outside First Keep BRAN..............2 1/4p 0 lines stunt JAIME.............0p 12 lines voice CERCEI............0p 12 lines voice BRAN 2.5)(p84) 1 1/2p Int first keep window view BRAN .............1 1/2p 1 line stunt JAIME.............1 1/2p 4 lines making out, heavy petting CERCEI............1 1/2p 3 lines making out, heavy petting BRAN 2 totals.....6 3/4p 34 lines BRAN..............6 3/4p 3 lines Interact with summer, climbing JAIME.............1 1/2p 16 lines heavy petting CERCEI............1 1/2p 15 lines heavy petting Extras 1/8p: on horse: ROBERT ROBB JOFFREY BENJEN JORY THEON RODRIK TYRION SFX SUMMER Prologue totals:.............10 p 59 lines BRAN 1 Totals:................7 3/4p 67 lines CAT 1 Totals..................6 1/8p 38 lines EDDARD 1 totals...............9 1/8p 60 lines JON 1 totals..................8 p 46 lines CAT 2 totals..................7 7/8p 86 lines ARYA 1 totals.................7 1/4p 53 lines BRAN 2 totals.................6 3/4p 34 lines Episode 1 totals.............62 7/8p 443 lines EDDARD STARK.................36 5/8p 104 lines nudity, short Sex scene, horse (Solemn, long brown hair. beard with white bits. Grey eyes) CATELYN STARK................21 5/8p 49 lines nudity, short sex scene (tully color, fair skin, fine, high cheekbones, thick auburn hair, blue eyes) JON SNOW.....................18 7/8p 45 lines direwolf interact x3 horse (14, grey-black eyes. slender. dark, gracefull quick) SIR WAYMAR ROYCE.............10 p 32 lines horse, sword fight, DEATH (18,grey eyed, slender) ROBERT BARATHEON.............15 p 30 lines horse (6.5 feet tall, and almost as wide back hair, beard, double chin, dark circles under eyes) ROBB STARK...................17 7/8p 16 lines horse, direwolf interact (15 big broad,tully color, fair skin, red-brown hair, blue eyes, strong fast) JAIME LANNISTER...............9 1/8p 16 lines heavy petting, horse (looks how a knight/king/etc should look, golden hair, green eyes) CERCEI LANNISTER..............9 1/8p 16 lines heavy petting (Beautiful as men said, Golden hair, green eyes) TYRION LANNISTER, THE IMP.....9 3/4p 15 lines tumbling (dwarf, protruding forhead, one green, one black eye, white blond hair) MAESTER LUWIN.................5 5/8p 15 lines (small grey man, quick grey eyes, balding grey hair) BENJEN STARK..................3 1/8p 15 lines (sharp featured, guant,hint of laughter in blue-grey eyes) WILL.........................10 p 14 lines horse DEATH(low 20's) GARED.........................8 p 13 lines beheaded, horse (Old Man, past 50, no ears, pinky) BRAN STARK...................17 1/2p 11 lines Interact with summer x2, climbing, wooden swordplay, horse (7) ARYA STARK...................14 7/8p 7 lines direwolf interact (9, lusterless brown, long solemn face) THEON GREYJOY................17 p 6 line horse (19, Lean, dark, always smirking) JOFFREY BARATHEON............10 7/8p 6 lines horse (12, but tall. thick tangle of golden curls, green eyes, pouty lips, bored disdainful manner) SER RODRIK CASSEL.............3 1/4p 6 lines (Master at arms, stout keg of a man, white cheek whiskers) SEPTA MORDANE.................2 1/4p 5 lines (bony face, sharp eyes, thin lips made for frowning) SANSA STARK...................9 7/8p 4 lines (11, pretty, tully colors,fine, high cheekbones,thick auburn hair, blue eyes) JORY .........................7 7/8p 4 lines horse (Guard captain) SANDOR CLEGANE, THE HOUND.....4 3/4p 4 lines horse (terrible burned face) HULLEN........................7 3/4p 3 lines horse (stark master of horse) DESMOND.......................7 3/4p 2 lines horse HARWIN........................7 3/4p 1 line horse (hullen's son) GUARD 1.......................7 3/4p 1 line horse JEYNE POOLE...................2 1/4p 1 line (of age with sansa) BETH CASSEL...................2 1/4p 1 line (of age with sansa) LYANNA..........................1/4p 1 line (16, Stark colors, Gorgeous) TOMMEN BARATHEON.............10 3/4p 0 lines wooden swordplay (7, long whiteblond hair, plump) MYRCELLA BARATHEON............9 7/8p 0 lines (8,wisp of a girl, hair a cascade of golden curls, insipid, stupid) RICKON STARK..................7 5/8P 0 LINES (3 years old, tully colors) MANCE RAYDER..................6 P 0 LINES MERWYN TRANT..................1 5/8P 0 lines (droopy eyes rusty beard) BOROS BLOUNT..................1 5/8P 0 lines (bald w/jowly face) YOUNG EDDARD....................1/4p 0 lines HOWLAND REED....................1/4p 0 lines EXTRAS: 10 mounted guardS.............7 3/4p bench of younger squires......6 P dozen spectators..............4 P 1 OTHER.......................2 1/4P SWORD FIGHTING (color shifting reflective armor, skin white like milk, translucent crystal sword, burning blue eyes) 5 OTHERS......................2 1/4P crowd of retainers............1 5/8P HORSE [/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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