~Shiera Seastar~ Posted February 4, 2013 Share Posted February 4, 2013 Tyrion in ADWD, plus Penny. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minsc Posted February 4, 2013 Share Posted February 4, 2013 It is wrong that I want to say on whole Dany and her entire plot as it has play out. Simply, either her story is going to be a tremendous shaggy dog story or it is going to seem that her major success in winning the Iron Throne came mainly from her being the last one to the party. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Javi Marcos Posted February 4, 2013 Share Posted February 4, 2013 Danaerys post conquering Mereen. Conquer the city, burn it and try to do the same with Volantis.You won't know how to rule? Well, get a Council to do it, just like Old Good King Bob. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue Rose Direwolf Posted February 4, 2013 Share Posted February 4, 2013 I'd get rid of the Greyjoys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kolantero Posted February 4, 2013 Share Posted February 4, 2013 Turn the three elder sandsnakes into one, more fully-fledged character, similar to Oberyn (although not that similar to be unrealistic).Leave post-Getting-the-unsullied Dany/conquering the cities out. Unnecessary, i'd rather have Dany sit out from one book.Many of Bran's chapter beyond the wall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServantOnIce Posted February 4, 2013 Share Posted February 4, 2013 All of the prophesies and almost all of the magic.Then you would have a Tom Clancy novel . .. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServantOnIce Posted February 4, 2013 Share Posted February 4, 2013 Imagine you were the writer of ASOIAF. You're in charge in what direction the story goes.Now, what characters/events you could do without?I don't mean to kill the characters exactly (but if you wish to, okay), just that you see them (or a plot) as a waste of time and prefer to axe them to concentrate in something else.This is an offensive question. #JMO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gibson Posted February 4, 2013 Share Posted February 4, 2013 the words nuncle and serjeant Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magic 8 Ball Posted February 4, 2013 Share Posted February 4, 2013 nm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr Hodor Posted February 4, 2013 Share Posted February 4, 2013 the words nuncle and serjeanti love nuncle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eira Seren Posted February 4, 2013 Share Posted February 4, 2013 arys oakheart.arianne martell. tyrion's freakshow stint. big and little walder.or really, a bunch of Freys (though Uncat seems to be culling them for us). if we're also including the tv series, Roz, after her Theon scenes in season 1. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gibson Posted February 4, 2013 Share Posted February 4, 2013 i love nunclewhy? it's horrible. Never appeared til AFFC, and seemed to be an Ironborn thing and then Tommen used it...it made no sense!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ororo727 Jon Snow Fangirl Posted February 4, 2013 Share Posted February 4, 2013 The Ironborn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ororo727 Jon Snow Fangirl Posted February 4, 2013 Share Posted February 4, 2013 I'd eliminate any indepth threat from the Iron Islands. I suppose we need Victarion to sail to Mereen to woo Dany but I wouldn't have explained it. I'd have him showing up a surprise. Keep Asha and Theon and all the stuff with Balon and Victarion sailing at the end but no more. Maybe it's just me but I find them annoying.I agree 100%. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castellan Posted February 4, 2013 Share Posted February 4, 2013 For me Quentin storyline seemed all too long and unnecessary. Unless GRRM wanted to show how Darwin Awards are earned in Westeros/Essos. yesand I agree with most other posts here:the Maggi prophecy& the Sand snakes - I just get comfortable with one set of characters and then I have to learn another whole set. The later they are introduced in the book the less time they have to grow on you and accumulate detail so they remain unconvincingalso all the Iron Islands bunch - although some people seemed to get right in to learning about this culture - I just thought 'too many'!and yes, Bron is not expendable.and I did like the detail and background about the Westerling (is that the right name?) family to see how they ended up as Tywin's toolI found the Penny & Tyrion stuff boring but appreciated the horrible fact that practically as soon as Tyrion was on the run he ended up as a performing dwarf slave - seems the only occupation available to a low born dwarf. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ororo727 Jon Snow Fangirl Posted February 4, 2013 Share Posted February 4, 2013 why? it's horrible. Never appeared til AFFC, and seemed to be an Ironborn thing and then Tommen used it...it made no sense!!!Jaime used it as well. It's a term of endearment and I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starkbringer Posted February 4, 2013 Share Posted February 4, 2013 I would tone down on the banners and sigils a bit. You need a reference guide to keep up with them. And also all the food decscriptions. Too much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Florina Laufeyson Posted February 4, 2013 Share Posted February 4, 2013 arianne martell.D:< No way! If anything, id give her more POVs and eliminate Arys Oakheart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LoyalStarkBannerman Posted February 4, 2013 Share Posted February 4, 2013 Whenever Roose Bolton starts talking it really slows down my reading pace because I'm trying to visualize someone speaking extremely softly. :dunce: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ser Gerion Galifrey Posted February 4, 2013 Share Posted February 4, 2013 There are wayyyy too many filler chapters, with both Bran and Dany. I'd make penny catch fire, and I wouldn't make it look like Dorne is being run by idiots.I agree with the AA prophecy seeming childish.And I love the Greyjoys, but they aren't participating in the story like the rest of the great families... So why do they have so many damn PoVs...Also.. I miss the Blackfish and the BwB Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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