KOM Posted June 7, 2013 Share Posted June 7, 2013 Major Props. I think the TL near Saltpans can be cleaned up. There's the pillaging, and Arya boarding her ship. Later on that same ship appears at Maidenpool when Brienne's there. That's a missed connection you might want in your TL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Melnibonean Posted June 7, 2013 Share Posted June 7, 2013 Here's a problem for you: Cat encounters Jason Mallister the same day she abducts Tyrion. Jason is on his way to and arrives in time for the tourney. Yoren rides hard from the Inn to get to KL faster than anyone else to tell him about the abduction. But Yoren doesn't arrive until after the tourney. GRRM should have had Cat encountering Jason as soon as she left KL not at the Trident. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whatever Posted July 21, 2013 Share Posted July 21, 2013 Kudos you you - this is one of the most thoughtful and all around well done timelines every. I only have one nitpick, and I'm prety sure it's a typo more than anything. Row 34, AGOT, it says: 7/31, 298: Robb turns 16. Shouldn't thatbe 15? It's even said later in the book that Robb's still 15. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Melnibonean Posted July 23, 2013 Share Posted July 23, 2013 I think there needs to be more time between Dany's arrival in Qarth, Barristan's departure fro Pentos & Barristan's arrival in Qarth. Illyrio and the west have no way of knowing about the dragons until Jorah sends his last dispatch from Qarth. Let's say he does that when he goes to the docks after the arrive. Let's assume he finds a galley bound for Pentos with only one stop. I'm guessing it would take about a "turn." Let's say Barristan is waiting with Illyrio for word of Dany when the dispatch arrives and let's assume Illyrio is able to send Barristan with Groleo shortly thereafter. That would suggest to me you need at least two to three months. All you'd have to do to fix it woukd be to push Barristan's departure back to late July. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Melnibonean Posted August 5, 2013 Share Posted August 5, 2013 Sansa I should come before Tyrion III in Storm since Sansa should tell Dontos about Willas wedding plot before Tywin orders Tyrion to marry Sansa.ETA: Never mind. Sansa only recalls telling Dontos. In fact, since Cersei sends her dressmaker to Sansa in Sansa II presumably after the Lannisters intend to wed her to Tyrion Sansa II should be read after Tyrion III. It provudes a slightly different tske on Varys's capabilities and Littlefinger's motives too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Dead Just Broken Posted August 5, 2013 Share Posted August 5, 2013 Amazing work.This assumes that the pink letter is accurate and in fact was written after the battle and not before? I think there's strong evidence at this point that the pink letter is not entirely accurate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Melnibonean Posted August 16, 2013 Share Posted August 16, 2013 Storm, Jaime IX should precede Feast Victarion I since they know in the latter tha Roose is the Warden of the North but he is only named as such in the former. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megamutt Posted September 2, 2013 Share Posted September 2, 2013 Found small mistake, Sansa I in ASOS (dinner with Margaery) is before Tyrion I (Margaery is not yet in King's Landing). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mindchap Posted September 2, 2013 Share Posted September 2, 2013 I think this is the most work ever put into something on the reader side. I've been sending this link to folks for a while now after someone sent it to me. Now that I realize where it came from, thanks to the OP(or OPs) if they still read this, cool man, cool. :cool4: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riptide Posted September 2, 2013 Share Posted September 2, 2013 An internal contradiction; the timeline says Tyrion meets Shae on Boxing Day 298, and the chapter makes clear that the battle is the next day. Yet the timeline says that the Battle of the Green Fork happened on the 3rd of January. That can't be right.Also, less important, it says Euron was elected king on the 7th of January 300, but the battle of the Shield Islands apparently happened on the 30th of April. Did it really take the better part of four months to muster the navy, then sail with the wind behind them (though out of site of land) to the Shield Islands? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Melnibonean Posted September 12, 2013 Share Posted September 12, 2013 Cersei V must come before Jaime III in Feast since Jaime is still in Kings Landing in Cersei V but on his way to Harenhal in Jaime III. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ser Cortnay Penrose Posted September 12, 2013 Share Posted September 12, 2013 Cersei V must come before Jaime III in Feast since Jaime is still in Kings Landing in Cersei V but on his way to Harenhal in Jaime III.This shows how the creators of this timeline have stared themselves blindly on their own fictional creation to the extent that they are disregarding the actual order of events in the story. It's just logical that you can't reshuffle the order of chapters where two POV's are interacting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Melnibonean Posted September 12, 2013 Share Posted September 12, 2013 This shows how the creators of this timeline have stared themselves blindly on their own fictional creation to the extent that they are disregarding the actual order of events in the story. It's just logical that you can't reshuffle the order of chapters where two POV's are interacting.I still like this timeline with some minor adjustments and belief suspensions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
First of My Name Posted September 12, 2013 Share Posted September 12, 2013 Brilliant stuff.Nitpicking: Robb hears twice about the deaths of Rickon and Bran. It's in numbers 185 and 192. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bloodsteel bitterraven Posted September 12, 2013 Share Posted September 12, 2013 very nice. great success I like :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riptide Posted September 20, 2013 Share Posted September 20, 2013 Nitpicking: Robb hears twice about the deaths of Rickon and Bran. It's in numbers 185 and 192.Number 192 is worded poorly; it's Cat that hears of Bran and Rickon's deaths.A possible way to fix the Ironmen discrepancy I mentioned earlier: given that it's about 50% further from the Iron Islands to Deepwood Motte than it is from the Iron Islands to the Shield Islands, and winds were against Asha but for Victarian is it possible the Kingsmoot chapters, but not "The Prophet" or "The Reaver" occurred months later than the timeline now says? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lissa Nymeros Martell Posted September 20, 2013 Share Posted September 20, 2013 Anyone have a pre-asoiaf timeline? 0 AL - 290 AL? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Melnibonean Posted September 20, 2013 Share Posted September 20, 2013 Anyone have a pre-asoiaf timeline? 0 AL - 290 AL?There is a pretty helpful one on the Wiki. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jenerationx Posted September 20, 2013 Share Posted September 20, 2013 Anyone have a pre-asoiaf timeline? 0 AL - 290 AL?This is pretty cool as well: http://www.sermounta...eline/index.php"Download timeline spreadsheet" under Additional Resources has a detailed pre-ASOIAF timeline. Don't know how accurate it is, but it's similarly detailed.The wiki's timeline covers events in broad strokes; this one has things like births of major characters, which I find super helpful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mindchap Posted September 20, 2013 Share Posted September 20, 2013 So email the author so that these mistakes can be changed to make it even more precise, if you have the time and energy to point out the mistakes on here why not point them out to them so they can change it?We can all make it better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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