peterbound

Fair enough.

Should be read by young adults?

Goddamn that Jeff Somers can write. Go get 'We Are Not Good People'. You'll thank me later.

I thought he was castrated. Can't say why I thought that, and i've only read the whole series of books twice, but I always assumed that why he had to sit down.

Desperately trying to get through Written in Red by anne bishop. Seems like a book about the postal service more than anything. The concept of all powerful 'Others' that have hindered human progress is neat, but the lack of movement int he plot, and the mary sueness (everyone seems to like her, even the others who see us 'monkeys' as nothing other than food) of the main character makes for a shitty novel.

Can we just put *spoilers* in the title. These fucking tags are annoying as all get out.

I've got WitA, and will buy anything he puts out (except maybe his tie in shit), but have yet to read it. Been on a horror kick lately. It will be my next read.

I don't know... seems like she's getting away with it. Might be different, due to the original content coming out of a story mill, but it looks like she's making money off of her take on the story. http://www.dailydot.com/fandom/vampire-diaries-lj-smith-kindle-fanfiction/

Adam, I get that. Yes, Bantam is being unreasonable, but I just didn't know if there were legal side roads he could walk down and get the works out there via fanfic. I could have sworn there were examples of this happening with authors who couldn't work through contract issues. Can't remember where I read that, but I know it's happened. It's a pipe dream, I know. Just spitballing here.

couldn't he self publish fanfic? Didn't some author do that a while back to get out of a contract, some vampire author if i remember.

Goddam that's bad. Seriously man, somewhere in your mind you have to know that, right? It's fucking stanek/goodkind level bad.

Yeah, I'm starting to think this is some form of performance art. Also, what's wrong with being blunt? I've never understood the problem with that trait.

First thing that caught my eye as well. Not a good sign when the descriptors are confusing right out the gate. Not sure 'well rounded' and 'petite' fall into the same category. Really tried getting through the few chapters you had posted, chief, but holy shit that's some horrible writing you've got going on there. You're trying too hard to be gimmicky with the language, the plot is on the back burner, and the fucking purple prose is making my goddam eyes bleed. I attempted to make sense of what was up on your website, but I still have no fucking clue what the story is about. I get you are trying to sound olde fashion-y, but it just comes off sounding silly. Focus on the story more, tighten up the text, and then focus on word choice/type. You're letting your gimmick run your mind. Not a good way to go. Seriously, and I'm not trying to be a dick here, but this stuff isn't good. I know that's hard to hear, and I'm sure you'll deflect, call my avatar stupid, and somehow attempt to invalidate my opinion, but it doesn't change the fact that the stuff you put out into the world is painful to read and the work of someone trying too hard, and not having a fucking clue of what they are doing.

I got an 11,000 dollar pay raise today. To celebrate, I bought a new Shotgun.

That's freaking outstanding. Good for you guys.