Maester Mando Posted February 4, 2015 Share Posted February 4, 2015 That bloody ironborn section.My thinking is that I'll suggest this:p. 180: By his day, the first Men of the green lands had largely abandoned the shores of the Sunset Sea for fear of the reavers. -> By his day, the men of the green lands had largely abandoned the shores of the Sunset Sea for fear of the reaversp. 181: And late in the Age of Heroes, another crisis weakened and divided the ironborn further still. -> And then came another crisis weakened and divided the ironborn further still.p. 182: The arrival of the Andals in the Seven Kingdoms only hastened the decline of the iron islands -> The arrival of the Andals in the Seven Kingdoms centuries before had only hastened the decline of the iron islandsIn effect, this means that there were Andals present in the late driftwood king period, that they had slowly begun to have an affect on things to start with but eventually became more and more of a problem for the ironborn.That should bring it in line with all the other sections. The Justmans were a post-Andal house some decades/centuries after the fall of the Mudds, they lasted three centuries, Qhored I Hoare took them out, but the decline of the ironborn that followed was obviously tied to the growing presence of the Andals on the mainland. And then as to Teague, Torrence Teague started a dynasty that eventually lost the throne, but centuries later another Teague had hold of things. No errata for that last, don't think we'll change anything regarding the Teagues in the text.Many thanks for the attentiveness!Sounds good. But regarding the iron islands section, whats the matter with harwyn hoare? Did he live after the doom? The text says he fought as a second son like many other ironborn for the free cities in their trade wars (shortly aftr the doom?) And he was also a captive of basilisk isles corsairs, which according to their section came only 200 years ago (same with nymeria and the rhoynar)These points seem like inconsistencies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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