Alayne's Shadow. Posted May 4, 2015 Share Posted May 4, 2015 Well, I'm thinking this is pretty much self-explanatory. What scenes this week you think would have been done more justice if rewritten with better dialogue and delivery, even if keeping it's plot points and content, and how would you have done it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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