Ibbison from Ibben Posted November 10, 2020 Share Posted November 10, 2020 from Not a Blog -Nov 8, 2020 Quote In addition to turning out new chapters, I’ve been revising some old ones (some very old)… including, yes, some stuff I read at cons ages ago, or even posted online as samples. I tweak stuff constantly, and sometimes go beyond tweaking, moving things around, combining chapters, breaking chapters in two, reordering stuff. So... Are there any changes you think he should make in the published/read sample chapters? Are there any changes you think he might make, but would disagree with? I have one desired change. In Alayne I, LF sets up a party with Alayne/Sansa in a featured position. It's a fantasy come true for Sansa. Yet remarkably, GRRM provides no description of Sansa's dress. Given that it is a Sansa POV chapter, I find this completely OOC. George needs to channel his inner Jim Rigney and provide a description. Any others? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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