In Book Scene Breakdown

[Smoldering Hound]

So I was perusing some old threads and I found my old breakdown of the scenes of the book. I figured that now the greenlight announcement yea or nay is imminent (within 3 months), Now'd be a good time to repost it.

Prologue____================================================12==12==10==10=X!!@ Enter Others @the wall

Prologue.1)(p1)Ext. snowy woods. twilight. 6p

Prologue.2)(p7) Ext Wildling Camp, Night 3 1/4p0

Prologue.3)(p10) Ext wildling camp, Night 3/4p

Prologue totals:.......10p

============BRAN 1===========================================9==21===8==18=O!@ |1- Enter Stark Crew, Ice @Winterfell

BRAN 1.1)(p13) Ext town square snow 2p

BRAN 1.2)(p15) Ext Traveling on road to bridge snow 1 5/8p

BRAN 1.3)(p17) Ext river bank knee deep snow 4 1/8p

BRAN 1 Totals:.....7 3/4p

============CAT 1============================================6==27===5==23=O Enter Cat

CAT 1.1)(p22) 5 1/8 pages Ext(?) Enclosed Godswood, open sky.

CAT 1 Totals.........5 1/8p

==============|=========================..........DANY 1====11==38==10==33=O|2- Enter Eastern crew, Drogo @Pentos

EDDARD 1.5)(p44) 1/4p ext ruby ford flashback Robert kills Rhegar

DANY 1.2)(P30) 1/8p INT Kings landing Gregor kills Elia, daughter, and baby

DANY 1.3)(p30)1/8p Int Iron Chair Throne room Jaime kills Rhegar

EDDARD 10.1)(p424) 1 3/8 page Ext tower of joy (stolen from the beginning of edd 10) Ned and Friends Kill 3 Kingsguard

DANY 1.4)(p30)1/8p Int Dragonstone Dany's birth

DANY 1.5)(p31)1/4p Ext Dragonstone Darry smuggles Dany away

DANY 1.6)(p31)1/4p INT House with the RED DOOR and LEMONTREE. Willam Darry dies.

DANY 1.7)(p31)1/2p Ext Montage of merchant meetings Visceris and kid move around

DANY 1.1)(p28)1 3/4p int Illyrio's estate, Pentos Dany in a dress

DANY 1.8)(p32)2 3/8p int Illyrio's estate, Pentos Dany gets ready

DANY 1.9)(p34)1 7/8p int Illrio's coach On the way to Drogo

DANY 1.10)(P36)2 1/2P int Drogo's mansion Intro to Drogo, Jorah.

DANY 1 Totals.................11 1/2p

============EDDARD 1===================.============|=======10==48===9==32=O~Enter Lannisters, King, Sandor ~tower of joy

EDDARD 1.1)(p39) 1 5/8 pages Ext Winterfell Gate

EDDARD 1.2)(p41) 2 3/4 pages int crypt

EDDARD 1.3)(p43) 1/4 page int tower of joy

EDDARD 1.4)(p44) 1/8p Int. crypt

skip eddard 1.5 (p44) 1/4p ext ruby ford flashback

EDDARD 1.6)(p44) 4 3/8p Int. crypt

EDDARD 1 totals......9 1/8p 60 lines

============JON 1=====================.=============|========9==57===8==40=O Enter Benjen, Meet Jon

JON 1.1)(p49)6p Int great hall of Winterfell

JON 1.2)(p55)2p Ext Winterfell courtyard

JON 1 totals......8p

============CAT 2====================.==============|=======10==67===9==49=O$ $both nude

CAT 2.1)(p58) 6 5/8p Int Catelyn's Chambers

CUTSKIPCUT put dialogue in arya1 CAT 2.2)(p65) Flashback Winterfell Ned brings home infant, maids talk of ashara dayne, cat asks in bed and gets

shut down

CAT 2.3)(p66) 1 1/4p

CAT 2 totals.........7 7/8p

============ARYA 1==================.===============|========8==75===7==56=xO Meet Arya

ARYA 1.1)(p68) 2 1/4 Pages Int ladies study, winterfell

ARYA 1.2)(p70) 1 page int guardroom

ARYA 1.3)(p71) 4 pages Ext bridge window overlooking Winterfell sword practice yard

Skip 1/8 page arya's room.

ARYA 1 totals..........7 1/4p

============BRAN 2=================.================|=======10==85===9==65=* -1| * Yes, in this story, we cripple kids.

BRAN 2.1)(p76)1/8p Ext Winterfell gate the hunt rides out

BRAN 2.2)(P78)7/8p Ext Godswood, Winterfell

BRAN 2.3)(p79)2p Ext Winterfell rooftops

BRAN 2.4)(p82) 2 1/4p Ext outside First Keep

BRAN 2.5)(p84) 1 1/2p Int first keep window view

BRAN 2 totals.....6 3/4p

============TYRION 1==============.=================|========7==92===6==81=O^|3-

TYRION 1.1)(p86)3/4p Int Winterfell Library. Tyrion pulls his head out of a book

TYRION 1.2)(p87)1 7/8p Ext Winterfell Sword Practice yard Tyrion convinces Joff to not send the Hound to kill Direwolves

TYRION 1.3)(p89)3 1/8p Int Winterfell Guest house Morning room Tyrion has a nice conversation with his brother and sister.

TYRION 1 totals...........5 3/4p

==========__JON 2______==========.==================|========6==96===5==86=O|4-

JON 2.1)(p93)2 1/4p Int Bran's room "it should have been you" Cat's mean to Jon

JON 2.2)(p95)1p Ext Winterfell Gate. Jon meets Robb

JON 2.3)(p96)2 1/8p Arya's room Jon gives Needle to Arya.

TYRION 2.1)(p118)2p Ext Winterfell gate, Both parties are leaving winterfell

JON 2 totals...7 3/8p

=========/====|========\========..................DANY 2====12=108==11==97=$X@! Enter Dany's girls, Dragon eggs $Dany's first time @Khal camp

DANY 2.1)(p99)1 3/8p int Drogo's mansion Illyrio and Visceris discuss the wedding

DANY 2.2)(p100)3/8p int dream bonfire dragon. Visceris wakes the dragon, literally

DANY 2.3)(p101)5 3/4p Ext day outside Pentos gates DANY gets hitched, and accepts gifts

DANY 3.2)(p227)1/4p Flashback Int Visceris vows to illyrio to stay with drogo till he gets what's his.

DANY 2.4)(p107)2p Ext Night, stream side Drogo gets some.

DANY 2 Totals.......9 3/4p

========/=====|=========EDDARD 2====================|========9=117===8=105=|5- (...Dany wedding)

EDDARD 2.1)(p109)2 7/8p Ext Dawn, the kingsroad, barrows King and Ned discuss Dany

EDDARD 2.2(P112)1/4p Int Iron Chair Throne room Flashback Tywin presents dead targs to robert

EDDARD 2.3)(p112)4 7/8p Ext Dawn, the kingsroad, barrows King and Ned discuss Lannisters

eddard 2 totals.....8 p

TYRION 2======|============|========================|=======10=127===9=114=O Enter Dragonlore

TYRION 2.2)(p120)7/8p Ext riding north to the wall

TYRION 2.3)(p121)1/4p Tyrion settling down at a river just outside camp to read.

TYRION 2.4)(p121)1p Flashback to INT cellar with dragonskulls

TYRION 2.5)(p122)5/8p Flashback flashback EXT 3 great dragons Burning lannister armies in the field

TYRION 2.6)(p123)4p Jon brings Tyrion back to present

JON 3.7)(P183)5/8p Ext Kingsroad on the road + Wall intro

TYRION 2 totals.......7 3/8p

==|=========CAT 3__________|_______=================|=======11=138===10=123=O|6- Enter Dagger

CAT 3.1)(p128)Int Bran's room 5 1/2p Cat mopes, gets attacked

CAT 3.2)(p134)Int Bran's room 4 1/2p Cat makes plans

CAT 3 totals.....10p

==|===========|=========SANSA 1====\================|=======15=152==14=137=Ox@ cliffhanger Enter Ilyn Payne, Barristan, Renly @Ruby Ford

SANSA 1.1)(p139)1 1/8p Int THE INN (We'll get to know this inn over time) Sansa talks with septa

SANSA 1.2)(p140)1/4p Ext THE INN walks to Arya

SANSA 1.3)(p140)3 1/8p Ext Bank of th Trident Arya pisses off Sansa

SANSA 1.4)(p144)4 7/8p Ext outside the Queen's wheelhouse Sansa meets more king's landing people

SANSA 1.5)(p148)3/8p Ext Riding w/joffrey Joffrey is a gentleman

SANSA 1.6)(p149)3 1/8p Ext Ruby Ford Joffrey is a jerk, and gets pwned by a little girl

SANSA 1 totals...12 7/8p

==|===========|=========EDDARD 3====\===============|========7=159===6=143=O!

EDDARD 3.1)(p153)1/2p int tower room Ned told arya's found

EDDARD 3.2)(p154)1/2p ext darry castle establish Walks to audience room

EDDARD 3.3)(p154)4 1/4p Int Darry audience room Cercei gets nasty

EDDARD 3.4)(p158)3/8p Darry Kennel Lady Executed

EDDARD 3.5)(p159)1/2p ext Darry Castle Hound Brings in Mycah's head.

EDDARD 3 totals...6 1/8p

==|===......BRAN 3=========|=========\==============|========5=164===4=147=~^ crow dream

BRAN 3.1)(p160)3 7/8p Crow tells Bran he can fly

BRAN 3.2)(p168)1/2p Summer is named

BRAN 3 totals........4 3/8p

==|==.========|============|=====_____CAT 4=========|=======11=175==10=157=O@ Enter Littlefinger, Varys Meet Rodrick @Kings Landing

CAT 4.1)(p165)2 1/2p Ext "Storm Dancer" deck. Rodrick fails to vomit

CAT 4,2)(P168)1 1/4p Ext Kings Landing waterfront, sailing in. Establishing shot

CAT 4.3)(p169)1 1/4p Ext "Storm Dancer" deck Dancer pulls in

CAT 4.4)(P170)1p Int, Room in the EEL ALLEY INN. Cat gets woken up

CAT 4.5)(P171)3/8p EXT Eel Alley Inn to Red Keep. and taken to...

CAT 4.6)(171)3 7/8p Small Council room. Littlefinger accuses Imp of dagger ownership

CAT 4 totals.....10 1/4p

JON 3=========|============|====/===================|=======14=189==13=170=Ox(bran is alive) Goodbye Benjen? Enter Jon's crew, Ser Thorne

JON 3.1)(p176)1 1/8p Ext Castle Black Training courtyard

JON 3.2)(p177)3/4p Int CB Armory Jon mopes

JON 3.3)(p178)5/8p Int CB Common hall Flashback arguing with Benjen

JON 3.4)(p179)3/8p Int CB Stables Watching Benjen leave

JON 3.5)(p179)4 p Int CB Armory More moping, fight.

JON 3.6)(P183)1/4p THE WALL, south side.

JON 3.8)(p184)2 1/2p Ext THE WALL, south side talks to Tyrion

JON 3.9)(p186)1p Int CB Mess hall gets message

JON 3.10)(p187)1/4p Ext CB (jon running up steps of commander's keep)

JON 3.11)(p187)1/2p Int Mormont's receiving room reads message

JON 3.12)(p188)1/8p Ext CB tells everyone

JON 3.13)(p188)3/4p Int Mess Hall Including Thorne.

JON 3 totals....12 1/4p

==|===========|=========EDDARD 4_===================|=======13=202==12=182=O$ -5| -6| Enter Pycelle $Brothel

EDDARD 4.1)(p190)5/8p Ext Red Keep Ned's party gets to KL

EDDARD 4.2)(p191)4 1/8p Int small Council room King orders a tournament.

EDDARD 4.3)(p195)1/2p Ext Red Keep Hustle and bustle of arrival

EDDARD 4.4)(p195)5/8p Int Keep halls Following littlefinger

EDDARD 4.5)(p196)3/8p Ext Bluff

EDDARD 4.6)(p196)3/4p Ext Brothel (Chataya's?)

EDDARD 4.7)(p197)1 1/2p Int Brothel Ned meets Cat

EDDARD 4.8)(p199)1/4p FLASHBACK:King talking about knives to Dany, Calling dead targs "war", Forcing Lady's execution

EDDARD 4.9)(p199)3 1/4p Int Brothel Ned learns about bran's assassination attempt

EDDARD 4 totals....12p

TYRION 3__====|============|=====\==================|=======12=214==11=193=O Enter Lord Captain Mormont

TYRION 3.1)(p203)2 3/8p Int Mormont's receiving room, dinner

TYRION 3.2)(p205)3 1/4p Int Mormont's receiving room Mormont asks for more men

TYRION 3.3)(p209)5/8P Ext CB (tyrion from commander keep to kings tower to THE WALL STAIRWAY/BASKET) Tyrion gets curious

TYRION 3.4)(P209)7/8p Int THE WALL BASKET and goes up the wall for one last look

TYRION 3.5)(p210)3 7/8p Ext Top of THE WALL and meets Jon.

TYRION 3 totals...11p

==|=======\===|=========ARYA 2====\=================|=======11=225==10=203=Ox Enter Syrio

ARYA 2.1)(p215)2p Int Small Hall Ned comes to eat

ARYA 2.2)(p217)5/8p Flashback Int Winterfell Hall Eating with dad in winterfell was cool "arya underfoot"

ARYA 2.3)(p218)3/4p Int Small Hall Eating with dad in KL suX0rs

ARYA 2.4)(p218)4 7/8p Arya's room, KL Father/Daughter talk.

ARYA 2.4)(p223)1/8p Int Small Hall Arya apologises to septa mordaine

ARYA 2.5)(p223)1 3/8p Int Small Hall Arya's first dancing lesson. Enter Syrio Forel

ARYA 2 totals...9 3/4p

==|========\==|============|=======\====..........DANY 3=====11=237===10=211=Ox$~ $Drogo every night ~montage

DANY 3.4)(p227)3/8p Day Ext Khalesar Dany having trouble riding, eating alone.

DANY 3.5)(p228)1/4p Night Int Dany's tent Drogo riding Dany in tears

DANY 3.6)(p228)1/8p rinse, repeat, fast foward.

DANY 3.7)(p228)1/4p Dragon Dream

DANY 3.8)(p228)3/4p Ext Khalesar Dany not having trouble riding

DANY 3.9)(p229)1/2p Rinse repeat, slower now, Drogo riding Dany smiling.

DANY 3.1)(p226)3/4p Ext Dothraki Sea Ridge Dany enjoys the outdoors

DANY 3.3)(p227)3/8p Ext Dothraki Sea Ridge And decides to go on alone.

DANY 3.10)(p230)2 1/8p Ext Dothraki Sea Beyond Ridge Visceris objects

DANY 3.11)(p232)2 1/8p Ext Dothraki Sea Going back to Khalesar Jorah Choses sides

DANY 3.12)(p234)2 1/2p Int Dany's Tent Dany is obviously pregnant

DANY 3 totals....10 1/8p

==|=========BRAN 4_________|_______=\==.============|=======13=249==12=225=O Enter Hodor

BRAN 4.1)(p237)1/4p Ext Practice Courtyard w/bran in his window. Rickon, Shaggydog frolic.

BRAN 4.2)(p237)4 5/8p Int BRAN's room Nan tells stories

BRAN 4.3)(p242)3 7/8p Int Winterfell High seat Imp brings Gifts

BRAN 4.4)(p246)1/4p Int BRAN's room Bran sleeps

BRAN 4.5)(p246)1/2p DREAM ext tower

BRAN 4.6)(p247)1/8p Int BRAN's room wakes

BRAN 4.7)(p247)1 1/2p Int Winterfell Great Hall Yoren tells the bad news

BRAN 4.8)(p248)1/2p Int BRAN's room Robb puts Bran to bed

BRAN 4 Totals.....11 5/8p

==|===========|=========EDDARD 5===\=\.=============|========9=258===8=233=O |7-

EDDARD 5.1)(p250)4 3/4p Int Pycelle's Solar Eddard begins investigating

EDDARD 5.2)(p255)1/2p Int Steps to Tower of Hand Arya is practicing

CUT SKIP CUT EDDARD 5.3)(p255)1/4p Flashback Ext Tower of Hand Godswood Ned arya sansa hold vigil for BRAN.

EDDARD 5.4)(p256)1/2p Int Steps to Tower of Hand Arya is practicing

EDDARD 5.5)(p256)1/8p Int Hand chambers

EDDARD 5.6)(p256)2p Int Tower of Hand Solar Littlefinger 4 servants left from arryn household

EDDARD 5 Totals.....6 7/8p

JON 4=========|============|========\.\=============|=======13=271==12=245=Ox enter Sam

JON 4.2)(p263)3/8p Montage Recruit tasks:Game hunting, Armory,messages,stood guard, stable mucking,fletching, Crow wrangling, Accounting.

JON 4.1)(p259)4 3/8p Ext Castle Black Training courtyard

JON 4.3)(p264)1/2p Ext Top of THE WALL Jon Gravel Scattering

JON 4.4)(p264)7/8p Int CB Mess Hall

JON 4.5)(p265)4 1/2p Ext CB to WALL BASKET

JON 4.6)(p270)5/8p Int CB Mess Hall

JON 4.7)(p270)1/8p Int a bunk, tight shot "We know where you sleep"

JON 4.8)(p210)1/4p Ext Castle Black Training courtyard

JON 4.9)(p211)3/8p Int Jon's room

JON 4 totals.........12p

==|===========|=========EDDARD 6====.\=\============|=======11=282==10=255=O Enter Gendry

EDDARD 6.1)(p272)1 5/8p Int Red Keep Small Council chambers

EDDARD 6.2)(p274)1/4 Ext Tower of Hand

EDDARD 6.3)(p274)2 1/2p Int Hand Chambers

CUT SKIP CUT EDDARD 6.4)(p276)3/8p FLASHBACK Renly shows Stannis picture of Margery

EDDARD 6.4)(p277)1/4p Int Hand chambers

EDDARD 6.5)1 1/2p Ext City streets Kingsgate to Tobho Mott's Armory Intro Beric Dondarion

EDDARD 6.6)3 1/2p Ned meets Gendry

EDDARD 6 Totals.........9 5/8p

==|===========|============|=======.==CAT 5=========|=======10=292===9=264=* -3||8- Cliffhanger Enter Marillon, Bronn @THE INN * Did she really

just do that?

CAT 5.1)(p283)2p Ext Kingsroad to THE INN Mallisters going to the tournament.

CAT 5.2)(p285)1/2p Int ROOM THE INN Cat gets a room

CAT 5.3)(p286)1 1/2p SFX Maps of the local area around THE INN

CAT 5.4)(p287)3/8p Int ROOM THE INN Rodrick brings her to dinner

CAT 5.5)(p287)4 5/8p Int Common Room THE INN All hell breaks loose.

CAT 5 totals.....9p

==|===========|=========SANSA 2===.==.==|===========|=======12=304==11=275=X! X Tournament Enter the Mountain, Beric, Thoros, Jalabar Xho, Loras

SANSA 2.1)(p293)5p Ext Tourney Grounds Jousts

SANSA 2.2)(P298)3P Ext Tourney Grounds tables Dinner

SANSA 2.3)(p301)2 5/8p Ext night field The Hound Opens up to Sanza

SANSA 2.4)(p304)3/8p Ext KL streets to sansas room And takes her home.

SANSA 2 Totals..........10 3/8p

==|===========|=========EDDARD 7=.==.===|===========|=======19=323==18=293=XO X Tournament Finale

EDDARD 7.1)(p305)1p Ext Morning Field at cart. Barristan mourns Hugh

EDDARD 7.2)(p306)5/8p Ext Tourney Grounds tables Tells Ned to change the kings mind.

EDDARD 7.3)(p307)4p Int Kings Pavilion King decides to not melee

EDDARD 7.4)(P311)5/8p Ext Tourney Grounds tables King cheers up

EDDARD 7.5)(p311)5 3/4p Ext Tourney Grounds Hound wins joust, Anguy wins archery, Red Priest wins Melee

EDDARD 7.6)(P317)3/4p Ext Tourney Grounds tables Ned catches up with Arya

EDDARD 7.6)(P318)5 1/8p Int Hand chambers Ned learns Jon Aryn was poisoned

EDDARD 7 totals.........17 7/8p

==|===========|============|==...==.==TYRION 4======|=======15=337==14=307=XO! X Mountain Clans

TYRION 4.2)(p325)2 3/8p Flashback Int THE INN

TYRION 4.3)(p327)1p Flashback Ext THE INN to the Eastern Road

TYRION 4.4)(p328)5/8p Eastern Road movement.

TYRION 4.1)(p324)7/8p Ext Eastern Road campsite Morning Tyrion's horse is cooked. Literally.

TYRION 4.5)(p329)8 5/8p Ext Eastern Road campsite Arguments, Battle, Horse problem solved.

TYRION 4 totals....13 1/2p....3 3/8p+10 1/8p

==|===========|=========ARYA 3====.=====|===========|=======13=350==12=319=O (...Dany pregnant)

ARYA 3.1)(p338)1p Ext From Red Keep to Outside Tommen/Myrcella room Chasing the tom

ARYA 3.2)(p339)1 1/2p Int Outside Tommen/Myrcella room Catching it and getting caught

ARYA 3.3)(p341)3/4p Int Getting lost in the castle Escaping

ARYA 3.4)(p341)1p Int cellar with dragonskulls Fearless

ARYA 3.5)(p342)3 1/4p Int Dark secret Hallways overhearing varys and illyrio

ARYA 3.6)(p346)1/4p Ext Sewer Exit bathing

ARYA 3.7)(p346)5/8p Ext Red Keep Entrance going home

ARYA 3.8)(p346)2 7/8p Int Hand's solar

ARYA 3.9)(p349)1/2p Int Stair from Hand's chambers

ARYA 3 totals.......10 3/4p

==|===========|=========EDDARD 8...=====|===========|========8=358===7=326=O

EDDARD 8.1)(p351)4 1/4p Int small Council room

EDDARD 8.2)(p355)3 1/4p Int Hand's solar

EDDARD 8 totals...7 1/2p

==|===========|============|====.==.==CAT 6=========|=======19=377==18=344=O$@ Enter Blackfish, Mya, Lysa and Rob $breastfeeding @the Gate, Vale,

Eyrie

CAT 6.1)(p359)2 1/2p Ext Eastern Path to Bloody Gate Vale knights bring party to safety

CAT 6.2)(p362)2p Ext Bloody Gate, Vale side Party drops off most, keeps singer and Bronn, adds blackfish, gale knights

CAT 6.3)(p364)4 3/4p Ext Bloody Gate to Gate of the Moon Cat tells all to blackfish

CAT 6.4)(p368)1 3/8p Ext Gate of the Moon

CAT 6.5)(P370)1 1/8p Ext Moon to Stone

CAT 6.6)(P371)3/8p IntTower of Stone

CAT 6.7)(p371)1/2p EXT stone to snow

CAT 6.8)(p372)1/4p Int tower of snow

CAT 6.9)(P372)1 7/8p Ext snow to sky

CAT 6.10)(p374)1/8p Int Sky Waycastle

CAT 6.11)(p374)1/8p Ext In the Basket

CAT 6.12)(p374)1/4p Int Winch Room

CAT 6.13)(p374)1/4p Int Winch room to Lysa's solar

CAT 6.14)(p375)2 1/2p Int Lysa's Solar

CAT 6 Totals....18p

==|===========|====.....EDDARD 9=.==.===|===========|========7=384===6=350=O$X cliffhanger $brothel X street fight (...Tyrion's capture)

EDDARD 9.3)(p379)1/4p flashback Winterfell Lyanna knows Robert's a houndog

EDDARD 9.4)(p380)5/8p Flashback Chataya's

EDDARD 9.1)(p378)3/4p Int Chataya's Ned's leaving

EDDARD 9.2)(p379)1/2p Ext rain KL streets Chataya's Littlefinger's Teasing

EDDARD 9.5)(p380)3 5/8p Ext rain KL streets

EDDARD 9.6)(p384)3/8p Ext rain KL to red Keep

EDDARD 9.7)(p384)1/8p Int Hand's Chambers Red Keep

EDDARD 9 totals....6 1/4p

==|===========|===.========|======.==...|.........DANY 4====11=395==10=360=0x@ @Vaes Dothrak (...Can't have Mormont assassinate here)

DANY 4.1)(p385)4p Ext Horse Gate Trash of dead kingdoms

DANY 4.2)(p389)2 7/8p Ext Vaes Dothrak Western to Eastern Market

DANY 4.3)(p392)2 3/4p Int, VD, Dany's room Visceris Rejects his gifts

DANY 4 Totals.....9 5/8p

==|=========BRAN 5=========|=======.====|===========|=======14=409==13=373=OX X Enter Osha (...Jory dead)

BRAN 5.1)(p396)2 3/4p Ext Winterfell Gate to Kingsroad Bran Rides

BRAN 5.2)(p399)1/2p Flashback Robb Calls to reinforce Moat Cailin

BRAN 5.3)(p399)1 5/8p Ext Kingsroad Robb tells Bran Jory's dead

BRAN 5.4)(p401)1/4p Ext KR to stream They look for wolves

BRAN 5.5)(p401)7 7/8p Ext snow Stream Bran gets bushwhacked and saved. (splitable)

BRAN 5 Total.....13p

==|===========|============|=======.==TYRION 5======|=======14=423==13=386=0@ cliffhanger @Sky cells

TYRION 5.1)(p410)1 1/2p Int Skycell Tyrion is hating life

TYRION 5.2)(p412)1/4p Ext Skycells Establishing shot ...in the skycells

TYRION 5.3)(p412)1/4p Int Skycell They slope

TYRION 5.4)(p412)2 1/4p Flashback Int Eyrie Throneroom Tyrion Can't hold his tongue.

TYRION 5.5)(p414)3 1/2p Int Skycell Tyrion gets Mord to send a message

TYRION 5.6)(p418)5/8p Int Night Skycell Tyrion woken by Ser Vardis

TYRION 5.7)(p418)4 3/8p Eyrie Throneroom Tyrion confesses

TYRION 5 totals......12 3/4p

==|===========|=========EDDARD 10==.====|===========|========7=430===6=392=O~ ~Tower of joy

EDDARD 10.2)(p425)5 1/8p Hand's chambers

EDDARD 10 Total..5 1/8p

==|===========|============|=======.==CAT 7=========|=======13=443==12=404=OX! -8| X BRONN Saves Tyrion

CAT 7.1)(p431)3/8p Ext Establishing shot Alysa's Tears and the Eyrie

CAT 7.2)(p431)1 1/2p Int Cat's room Eyrie Plans

CAT 7.3)(p433)5/8p Int Outside Lysa's Apartment Blackfish annoyed

CAT 7.4)(p434)3 3/8p Lysa's Terrace Pre fight conversation

CAT 7.5)(p437)2 1/2p Eyrie "Godswood" Bronn vs Ser Vardis

CAT 7.6)(p439)7/8p FLASHBACK BRANDON vs Littlefinger

CAT 7.6)(p440)2 3/8p Bronn vs Ser Vardis

CAT 7.6)(p440)5/8p Aftermath

CAT 7 Totals............12 1/4p

JON 5=========|============|=======.=/==|===========|========8=451===7=411=O Enter Maester Aemon

JON 5.1)(p444)1p Ext Castle Black Training courtyard Jon's crew graduates -Sam

JON 5.2)(p445)1 7/8p Int CB Mess Hall They Celebrate

JON 5.3)(p447)1 1/8p Ext Kingsroad south of CB Jon Reflects

JON 5.4)(p448)3 1/4p Master Aemon's Apartments Jon presents his plan to Aemon

JON 5 Totals......7 1/4p

==|===========|============|=======./=TYRION 6======|=======10=461===9=420=O |9- Enter Shagga and crew

TYRION 6.1)(p452)6 3/4p Ext twilight Eastern Road campsite

TYRION 6.2)(p459)2p Ext night Eastern Road campsite

TYRION 6 Totals..........8 3/4p

==|===========|=========EDDARD 11==/.========|======|=======10=471===9=429=O^ ^Rounding up a Posse

EDDARD 11.1)(p462)9p Int Iron Throneroom Eddard sends Dondarion after Gregor

EDDARD 11 Totals...9p

==|===========|=========SANSA 3===|==.=======|======|========8=479===7=436=O^ ^Time to pack up and Ned Figures it out.

SANSA 3.1)(p472)3/8p Int Sansa's room Sansa and Jeyne Gossip

SANSA 3.2)(p472)3/4p Flashback Steps from Throneroom

SANSA 3.3)(p473)1 5/8p Int Sansa's room More Gossip

SANSA 3.4)(p475)1/8p Int Kitchen Yum, Strawberry Pie

SANSA 3.5)(p475)3/8p Ext Tower of hand Gate Dondarion et al Leave.

SANSA 3.6)(p475)1 1/8p Int Tower of Hand Mess Hall Arya Throws an Orange at Sansa

SANSA 3.7)(p476)3 1/8p Int Sansa's room Sansa triggers Ned figuring it all out

SANSA 3 Totals......7 1/2p

==|===========|=========EDDARD 12=|===.......|======|========9=488===8=444=O -7|* * Did he really just do that?

EDDARD 12.1)(p480)3p Int Hand's chambers

EDDARD 12.2)(p483)1/4p Dream Int Iron Throneroom Tywin presents Dead targs to Robert, more detail this time.

EDDARD 12.3)(p483)1p Int Hand's chambers Ned's compassion overrides his sense.

EDDARD 12.4)(p484)3 7/8p Ext Hand's Godswood Ned plays the Game of Thrones poorly

EDDARD 12 totals........8 1/8p

==|===========|============|======|==========|====DANY 5====12=500==11=455=OX! -2|* X* Visc gets crowned

DANY 5.1)(p489)2 5/8p Ext Night Vaes Dothrak ceremonial pit Dany eats a heart

DANY 5.2)(p492)1p Ext Night Pit to Lake

DANY 5.3)(p493)1p Ext Night Lake Dany washes off

DANY 5.4)(p494)6 1/2p Ext Night Drogo's Hall Visceris gets crowned

DANY 5 totals...........11 1/8p

==|===========|=========EDDARD 13.|.........=|.=====|=======14=514==13=468=O |10-

EDDARD 13.1)(p501)1/4p Flashback Dream Int Winterfell Crypt

EDDARD 13.2)(p501)3/8p Hand's chambers

EDDARD 13.3)(p502)1/2p Hand's chambers to King's Chambers

EDDARD 13.4)(p502)4 1/4p King's chambers

EDDARD 13.5)(p506)1 3/8p Outside King's chambers

EDDARD 13.6)(p508)1p King's chambers to Hand's Chambers

EDDARD 13.7)(p509)5 1/8p Hand's Chambers

EDDARD 13 Totals........12 7/8p

JON 6=========|============|======|=========.|=.====|========8=522===7=475=O -4| Cliffhanger

JON 6.1)(p515)3/8p Int CB Mess Hall Sam Graduates

JON 6.2)(p515)3 5/8p Int CB Sept Graduates Get assigned

JON 6.3)(p519)1 3/8p Ext South side of THE WALL Sam calms Jon down

JON 6.4)(p520)5/8p Ext North side of THE WALL Leaving for the Oath

JON 6.5)(p521)1 3/8p Ext Weirwood Jon and Sam become Brothers of the Night's Watch

JON 6 Totals............7 3/8p

==|====.......|.........EDDARD 14=|==========|==.===|========7=529===6=481=OX!* X* "I did warn you not to trust me"

EDDARD 14.1)(p523)1/4p Ext Practice Yard

EDDARD 14.2)(p523)2 3/4p Hand's Solar

EDDARD 14.3)(p526)1/4p Hand's Solar to Iron Throne Room

EDDARD 14.4)(p526)2 3/4p Iron Throne Room

EDDARD 14 Totals........6p

==|===.=======|=========ARYA 4====|==========|.==.==|=======12=541==11=492=X!~ X Arya's first kill, Syrio schools Lannisters ~Crypt Flashback

ARYA 4.1)(p530)4 1/2p Int Small Hall Syrio's last lesson

ARYA 4.2)(p535)1 7/8p Int Kitchen-Int Stair-Int cellar-Ext yard-Int stable Arya Flees

ARYA 4.3)(p536)2 7/8p Int Stable Arya finds needle and kills a stableboy with it

ARYA 4.4)(p539)3/8p Ext Yard Arya walks to the sept

ARYA 4.5)(p540)3/8p Int Sept ...where she collects candles

ARYA 4.6)(p540)5/8p INT cellar with dragonskulls ...and uses them here

ARYA 4.7)(p541)5/8p Flashback Int Winterfell Crypt ...remembers Jon covered in flour

ARYA 4.8)(p541)1/4p Int cellar with dragonskulls ...and is not afraid.

ARYA 4 totals...........11 1/2p

==|==.========|====.....SANSA 4===|==========|=.==.=|=======10=551===9=501=O (Sansa sends letters...)

SANSA 4.1)(p542)2 3/8p Int Maegor's Holdfast Sansa listens to the screams of battle

SANSA 4.2)(p544)5/8p Ext Maegor's Holdfast to small Council room Boros takes her to the queen

SANSA 4.3)(p545)3p Int small Council room Sansa is the leak

SANSA 4.4)(p548)1/4p FLASHBACK Int Royal solar

SANSA 4.5)(p548)2 7/8p Int small Council room Sansa Writes letters

SANSA 4.6)(p551)1/4p Int Maegor's Holdfast Sansa wonders what happened to Arya

SANSA 4 Totals...........9 3/8p

JON 7=========|===.========|======.\=========|==.==.|=======16=567==15=516=OX |11- X fight with wights in Lord Mormont's tower (...Edd in jail)

JON 7.1)(p552)7 1/8p Ext snowy woods.

JON 7.2)(p559)3/8p Int stable

JON 7.3)(p560)3/4p CB Mess hall

JON 7.4)(p560)2 1/8p Mormont's Solar

JON 7.5)(p562)3/8p Wandering Solar to Mess hall

JON 7.6)(p563)7/8p CB Mess hall

JON 7.7)(p564)7/8p Jon's cell

JON 7.8)(p565)1/2p cell to solar

JON 7.9)(p565)2p Mormont's solar

JON 7 totals............15p

==|=========BRAN 6=========|======.=\=BRAN 6=|===.==|=======15=582==14=530=O |12- Enter Roose Bolton, Robet Glover, Maege Mormont, Greatjon Umber

BRAN 6.1)(p568)1/2p Ext Winterfell Outer Wall Turret

BRAN 6.2)(p569)1/4p FLASHBACK Int Bran's Room

BRAN 6.3)(p569)1/2p Ext Outside Winterfell Gates intercut faces from 6.4

BRAN 6.4)(p569)1/4p FLASHBACK Int Winterfell Great Hall

BRAN 6.5)(p570)1p Ext Winterfell Outer Wall Turret

BRAN 6.6)(p571)1 3/8p Ext Turret to portcullis to yard to godswood

BRAN 6.7)(p572)1p Ext godswood

BRAN 6.8)(p573)3/8p FLASHBACK Int Winterfell Crypt Rickon whines

BRAN 6.9)(p573)1 1/2p FLASHBACK Int Winterfell Great hall Robb controlls his bannermen

BRAN 6.10)(p575)1/2p FLASHBACK Int Bran's room

CUTSKIPCUT BRAN 6.11)(p575)3/8p FLASHBACK Int Random stories of travelers

BRAN 6.12)(p576)1/4p FLASHBACK Int Master Luwin's solar

BRAN 6.13)(p576)1/2p FLASHBACK Ext lichfield

BRAN 6.14)(p576)5 3/8p Godswood

BRAN 6 totals...........13 1/4p

==|===========|============|======.==\==|====|====DANY 6====12=594==11=544=OX^ X Mormont vs Wine Seller ^(...Assassination sent and rescinded)

DANY 6.1)(p583)2 1/4p Int, VD, Dany's room

DANY 6.2)(p585)1 1/2p Ext DANY's Litter Dany's room-eastern market-western market

DANY 6.3)(p587)4 3/4p Western Market

DANY 6.4)(p592)2 1/4p Int, VD, Dany's room

DANY 6.5)(p594)1/4p Ext Khalesar

DANY 6 totals...........11p

==|===========|============|======.===CAT 8==|======|=======12=606==11=555=O@^ Enter Wylis and Wendel @Moat Cailin ^War news

CAT 8.1)(p595)2 3/4p Ext Outside Moat Cailin

CAT 8.2)(p598)8p Int MC Gatehouse Tower

CAT 8 totals............10 3/4p

==|===========|============|======.===TYRION 7======|=======11=617==10=565=O Enter Tywin, Kevin Lannister

TYRION 7.1)(p607)7/8p Ext Eastern road

TYRION 7.2)(p608)1p Ext Eastern road to Lannister Host

TYRION 7.3)(p609)1 7/8p Ext Lannister Host to THE INN

TYRION 7.4)(p611)5 7/8p Int THE INN common room

TYRION 7 totals..........9 5/8p

==|====.......|.........SANSA 5==.======|===========|=======10=627===9=574=O

SANSA 5.1)(p618)8 5/8p Int Iron Throne room

SANSA 5 totals...........8 5/8p

==|===.=======|=========EDDARD 15=======|===========|=======10=637===9=583=O~ (...The Imp beat the rap) ~flashback harrenhal, tower of joy

EDDARD 15.1)(p628)2 3/8p Int Red Keep Dungeon cell

EDDARD 15.2)(p630)1p FLASHBACK Ext Harrenhall Tournament

EDDARD 15.3)(p631)5 1/4p Int Red Keep Dungeon cell

EDDARD 15 totals.........8 5/8p

==|==.========|============|==========CAT 9=========|=======14=651==13=596=O@ @Twins Enter Walder Frey

CAT 9.1)(p638)1 1/2p Ext day Winterfell Host

CAT 9.2)(p640)1 1/2p Ext night Winterfell Host

CAT 9.3)(p641)1 1/8p Ext day Winterfell Host

CAT 9.4)(p642)2 1/8p Ext day Twins

CAT 9.5)(p644)4 7/8p Int Twins Great Hall

CAT 9.6)(p649)1 3/4p Ext day Twins

CAT 9 totals............12 7/8p

JON 8=========|============|============|===========|=======13=664==12=608=O Enter Longclaw (...Selmy removed from Kingsguard)

JON 8.1)(p652)6 1/8p Int Mormont's solar -1/4p wight fight -1/4p nightmare

JON 8.2)(p658)1 5/8p Ext Outside Kings tower -1/4p wight fight

JON 8.3)(p660)1p Jon's cell

JON 8.4)(p661)3 5/8p The Rookery

JON 8 totals............12 3/8p

==|===========|============|============|=========DANY 7====10=674===9=617=O$x! |13- $rape xBattle Aftermath Enter Maegi Mirri Maz Dur

DANY 7.1)(p665)4 1/4p Ext Battle Aftermath

DANY 7.2)(p669)5 1/4p Ext Outside Lhazareen temple

DANY 7 totals............9 1/2p

==|===========|============|==========TYRION 8======|=======19=693==18=635=O$X! $Enter Shae XBattle of Green Fork

TYRION 8.1)(p675)2 1/2p Ext Lannister Host Captain's table Tyrion gets his orders

TYRION 8.2)(p678)3/8p Ext Lannister Host ...Wanders home

TYRION 8.3)(p678)5/8p Ext clan camps ...Past his men

TYRION 8.4)(p679)5/8p Ext Outside Tyrion's tent ...Meets shae

TYRION 8.5)(p679)1 3/8p Int Tyrion's tent ...Shae performs

TYRION 8.6)(p681)7/8p Ext Outside Tyrion's tent ...He takes a whiz

TYRION 8.7)(p681)5/8p Int Tyrion's tent ...Gets woken up

TYRION 8.8)(p682)1/2p Ext Outside Tyrion's tent ...by starks attacking

TYRION 8.9)(p683)1/2p Int Tyrion's tent ...gets dressed

TYRION 8.10)(p683)1/2p Ext Outside Tyrion's tent ...and on his horse

TYRION 8.11)(p684)2 7/8p Ext Lannister Host preps for Battle

TYRION 8.12)(p686)4 3/4p Ext Battle

TYRION 8.13)(p691)5/8p Ext Battle Aftermath

TYRION 8.14)(p692)1p Ext Riverbank

TYRION 8 Totals.........17 3/4p

==|===========|============|==========CAT 10========|========8=701===7=642=OX X Battle of Whispering Woods

CAT 10.2)(p695)5/8p Collage of waiting DAD, Brandon, Ned, Rob

CAT 10.1)(p694)1/2p Ext Whispering woods

CAT 10.3)(p695)6 3/8p Ext Whispering woods

CAT 10 totals............7 1/2p

==|===========|============|============|=========DANY 8====14=715==13=655=OX~ cliffhanger X Chaos via "he fell off his horse" ~red magic

DANY 8.1)(p702)2 3/8p Ext Brown hills

DANY 8.2)(p704)7 1/2p Int Tent

DANY 8.3)(p712)3 1/2p Ext Outside Tent

DANY 8 Totals...........13 3/8p

==|===========|===.......ARYA 5....=====|===========|=======13=728==12=667=OX!*^ -10| X Ned dies ^Arya goes with Yoren (Ned's dead..)

ARYA 5.1)(p716)8p Ext Streets/harbor of KL

ARYA 5.2)(p724)4p Ext KL sept

ARYA 5 totals...........12p

==|=========BRAN 7==.======.=====.=.====|===========|=======12=740==11=678=O~^ ~Ned's in the crypt ^Green Dreams Sux0r

BRAN 7.1)(p729)2 3/8p Int Maester Luwin's Turret overlooking Winterfell yard

BRAN 7.2)(p729)3 7/8p Int Winterfell crypt

BRAN 7.3)(p735)4 1/2p Int Maester Luwin's Turret

BRAN 7 totals...........10 3/4p

==|================.=====SANSA 6==.=.===|===========|=======10=750===9=687=O^ ^Sansa is alone

SANSA 6.1)(p741)1/4p Int Maegor's Holdfast

SANSA 6.2)(p741)3/8p DREAM Ned's Execution

SANSA 6.3)(p742)3 5/8p Int Maegor's Holdfast

SANSA 6.4)(p745)1 1/8p Int Iron Throne Room

SANSA 6.5)(p746)1 1/2p Throne room to top of gate house

SANSA 6.6)(p747)2 1/4p Top of Gate House

SANSA 6 totals...........9 1/8p

==|===.............================.=.==|=========DANY 9====11=761==10=697=O!~ Exit Drogo ~red magic

DANY 9.1)(p751)2p DREAM

DANY 9.2)(p753)5 1/2p Int Tent

DANY 9.3)(p759)1 5/8p Ext Red earth

DANY 9.4)(p760)1 1/4p Int Tent

DANY 9 totals...........10 3/8p

==|==.==============================.=TYRION 9======|=======10=771===9=706=O^ -9| ^Tyrion is the new hand

TYRION 9.1)(P762)8 5/8P Int THE INN

TYRION 9.2)(p771)1/4P Int Tyrion's room THE INN

TYRION 9 totals..........8 7/8p

JON 9================================.==|===========|=======13=784==12=718=O^ -11| ^Jon stays at the wall

JON 9.1)(p772)1/2p Int Stable

JON 9.2)(p773)3 3/8p Ext Kingsroad

JON 9.3)(p776)3/8p Mole's town

JON 9.4)(p776)4 3/8p Ext Kingsroad

JON 9.5)(p781)1/4p Int Stable

JON 9.6)(p781)1/8p Int Kitchen

JON 9.7)(p781)3 3/8p Mormont's solar

JON 9 Totals............12 3/8p

======================================CAT 11========|=======13=797==12=730=O@^ -12| @Riverrun ^Rob is King in the North

CAT 11.1)(p785)1 7/8p Ext Riverrun

CAT 11.2)(p787)1/2p RR bailey to Hoster's solar

CAT 11.3)(p787)2 3/8p Hoster's solar

CAT 11.4)(p790)3/8p bailey

CAT 11.5)(p790)3/8p RR Great Hall

CAT 11.6)(p791)1 1/4p RR Godswood

CAT 11.5)(p792)5p RR Great Hall

CAT 11 totals...........11 3/4p

==================================================DANY 10===10=807===9=739=O^* -13| ^Dany has dragons

DANY 10.1)(p798)8 5/8p Ext Red land

DANY 10 totals...........8 5/8p

[About Yea High]

That probably makes more sense to me than most, and I still had a hard time following it (partly because, as I'm looking at it, the end of each sentence gets hidden by the website's tags).

Can you break down some of what you just posted (perhaps one per episode, starting with the first) and explain to the laymen what everything means?

[Smoldering Hound]

So what does this mean?

==|=======\===|=========ARYA 2====\=================|=======11=225==10=203=Ox Enter Syrio

Second Arya POV chapter, 11 book pages, 225 book pages total, about 10 pages of text, about 203 text pages, Brief description is this is where we first meet Syrio Forel

Scenes begin and end when the location changes.

ARYA 2.1)(p215)2p Int Small Hall Ned comes to eat

Second Arya Pov chapter, first scene begins in the middle of page 215, a scene that is 2 pages of text begins located Interior in the Small Hall location, where Ned comes to eat.

The second scene starts half way down the page (two pages exactly from a chapter beginning)

ARYA 2.2)(p217)5/8p Flashback Int Winterfell Hall Eating with dad in winterfell was cool "arya underfoot"

Third scene begins 1/8 page from top of p218

ARYA 2.3)(p218)3/4p Int Small Hall Eating with dad in KL suX0rs

ARYA 2.4)(p218)4 7/8p Arya's room, KL Father/Daughter talk.

ARYA 2.4)(p223)1/8p Int Small Hall Arya apologises to septa mordaine

ARYA 2.5)(p223)1 3/8p Int Small Hall Arya's first dancing lesson. Enter Syrio Forel

ARYA 2 totals...9 3/4p

Total text pages for the second Arya POV chapter is 9 and 3/4 pages.

Lots of the odd symbols are from a previous story structure thread.