Gave it a 4/10.
Very choppy and no rhythm, as mentioned by prior posters.
Red Toast makes no sense (how did Arya make it work logistically?), but I will let that one slide.
Cringe-worthy dialogue with Jon-Sansa and Cersei-Jaime. Cersei-Jaime is actually one of the deepest and best-written relationships in the book that D&D just butchers. Inexcusable.
The Hound and BWB scene, heavy-handed but at least respectful. I also appreciate the gravedigger shoutout.
The closing scene on Dragonstone is, well, what you'd expect with Emilia Perpetually-Constipated Clarke.