ViniciusMJ Posted August 2, 2015 Share Posted August 2, 2015 I would rearrange some things, include others and exclude a little. Ah, and I'd make ten episodes instead of eight. But overall, a very good idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thehandwipes Posted August 2, 2015 Share Posted August 2, 2015 Bumping this because of the HBO President's recent comments. :drool: "Throw in some bad pussy, gratuitous rape, and make sure every third scene is set in a brothel, and you're hired. I'll have Dan Weiss out of your office by Monday," Michael Lombardo. For real, fantastic outline, I wish you really did work for HBO, they could use you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
clair de lune Posted August 3, 2015 Author Share Posted August 3, 2015 I would rearrange some things, include others and exclude a little. Ah, and I'd make ten episodes instead of eight. But overall, a very good idea. Perhaps. Looking back on this I could see myself changing the Rhaegar/Lyanna storyline. I definitely made it a tragic romance in this outline. I might also only have them disappear for one episode before showing what they're up to. What other input did you have? About rearranging and including/excluding things. Love to hear your thoughts! ---------------------------------------------- Also, here is a link to a more detailed outline I wrote earlier this year. https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B4A7vdAwVfOZS1Q2ZVdTUmJxaEk/view?usp=sharing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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