Fragile Bird Posted June 30, 2015 Author Share Posted June 30, 2015 Take heart! I am already seeing very interesting submissions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Woofless Posted June 30, 2015 Share Posted June 30, 2015 Take heart! I am already seeing very interesting submissions! My brain hurts! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emmit Posted June 30, 2015 Share Posted June 30, 2015 1. 5. STARK Passerby gaze inwards momentarily. ~ Remember ~2. 11. Severed promise. Grey, immortal mourning reigns.3. 4. Still proudly growling, "I maintain resistance."4. 7. Suddenly, painfully, grievously impaled. Mother's regret.5. 8. Strong, proud, gone in mere ruse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stonehearted Snake Posted June 30, 2015 Share Posted June 30, 2015 First - 10. Snow piles grief. Ice metes revenge.Second - 11. Severed promise. Grey, immortal mourning reigns.Third - 15. Seldom Pretentious, Gleefully Idealistic, Monstrously Robbed.Fourth - 2. Silent prayer: Gods, inspire my realm.Fifth - 7. Suddenly, painfully, grievously impaled. Mother's regret. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Criston of House Shapper Posted June 30, 2015 Share Posted June 30, 2015 #1: 16#2: 1#3: 4#4: 7#5: 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aegon the Poached Posted July 1, 2015 Share Posted July 1, 2015 1. #12. #153. #74. #95. #16 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aegon the Poached Posted July 1, 2015 Share Posted July 1, 2015 One day I'm going to make a haiku, and it's going to get every vote. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night'sQueen Posted July 1, 2015 Share Posted July 1, 2015 1st: 4. Still proudly growling, "I maintain resistance." <--- This is the spirit I wanted to capture but just couldn't. :bowdown: 2nd: 13. Skillfully Played. "Greetings" Intention Maliciously Relayed! 3rd: 9. Sew... Poor Greywind Is My Replacement? <--- Even though this references an act that horrifies me beyond all else, I have to vote for it because...wit. 4th: 6. Son persisted gamely; insolently murdered - renegades! 5th: 7. Suddenly, painfully, grievously impaled. Mother's regret. Now, I'm going to encourage my cat to lie on the keyboard and see what he can come up with for Tywin... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night'sQueen Posted July 1, 2015 Share Posted July 1, 2015 One day I'm going to make a haiku, and it's going to get every vote. I wish there was a "like" button. :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emmit Posted July 1, 2015 Share Posted July 1, 2015 Now, I'm going to encourage my cat to lie on the keyboard and see what he can come up with for Tywin...I wish there was a like button. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fragile Bird Posted July 1, 2015 Author Share Posted July 1, 2015 So you want a haiku assignment? 5 - 7 - 5? (syllables - don't know how I would do it in letters...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Woofless Posted July 1, 2015 Share Posted July 1, 2015 One day I'm going to make a haiku, and it's going to get every vote. I did a haiku a while back for winter, when we did the seasons. Letters - IAWFF TMUSW KSUNC In a white frost fort The months unfold slowly, while Knights send up news crows. Can't remember if I submitted it or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fragile Bird Posted July 1, 2015 Author Share Posted July 1, 2015 Oh my, I would have voted for that. You didn't submit it, I'm pretty sure... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ser Not Appearing Posted July 1, 2015 Share Posted July 1, 2015 Appreciate the votes last round. Glad the pun was noticed. I wondered, at first.Spotty internet here in the Black Hills (vacation) so if I disappear, you know why... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fragile Bird Posted July 1, 2015 Author Share Posted July 1, 2015 Appreciate the votes last round. Glad the pun was noticed. I wondered, at first. Spotty internet here in the Black Hills (vacation) so if I disappear, you know why... Enjoy your vacation, Ser! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rocksniffer Posted July 1, 2015 Share Posted July 1, 2015 well no votes last time though i thought i had it in the bag...ok SWMBO, kick it up a notch and get ahead of me.... going to lose big even though i am trying...i need to go back to drinking... :smoking: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aegon the Poached Posted July 1, 2015 Share Posted July 1, 2015 I did a haiku a while back for winter, when we did the seasons. Letters - IAWFF TMUSW KSUNC In a white frost fort The months unfold slowly, while Knights send up news crows. Can't remember if I submitted it or not. Why would you not submit this! Love it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castellan Posted July 1, 2015 Share Posted July 1, 2015 We remember Robb Stark...#1 11. Severed promise. Grey, immortal mourning reigns.#2 1. Some paths grimly instigate man's ruination. #3 14. Southrons proudly guard, Incised many regards. #4 16. Sadly pretenders get important marriages red.5. STARK Passerby gaze inwards momentarily. ~ Remember ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yomi Posted July 1, 2015 Share Posted July 1, 2015 First: 5. STARK Passerby gaze inwards momentarily. ~ Remember ~Second: 8. Strong, proud, gone in mere ruse.Third: 2. Silent prayer: Gods, inspire my realm.Fourth: 15. Seldom Pretentious, Gleefully Idealistic, Monstrously Robbed.Fifth: 4. Still proudly growling, "I maintain resistance." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Woofless Posted July 1, 2015 Share Posted July 1, 2015 Why would you not submit this! Love it. Honestly didn't think it would be recognized as a haiku. It was a toss up between In a white frost fort The months unfold slowly, while Knights send up news crows. and It’s academic - winter follows fall, The months unfolding slowly Within keen season, until newer call. So I think I went with this: Information about Winter: Following Fall the maesters usually send white kawing semiotics, ushering numbing coldness. :ohwell: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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