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Acrophobia #18 - The Grave Epitaph, Won by Emmit!


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It is one of my favorite entries of all time!

Thanks! :) I was glad when you wrote "The North Remembers!" next to my entry. It was good to see the paraphrase was recognizable.

A number of people have commented to me about having 10 rounds - how does everyone feel about the idea?

Is this a fun topic?

I'm fine with 10 rounds - why not?

My votes:

1st 14. Benevolent, Gallant, Youthful prize.

His righteous life, purloined at sunrise.

2nd 13. By gods, you pass hereafter, ruling lands past always summer.

3rd 8. Begone guilt, yesterday's petty harms -

Relish life's peaches, after storms

4th 3. Beloved Gentle Young Peach Here Rests. Lamentably Pitted Against Stannis.

5th 15. Bye, Gallant Young Potential Hero, R'hllor's Light Produced A Shadow.

Wow, this was difficult! Great entries!

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...and see I was really trying to be serious last round and i choked..



i believe that if this is supposed to be headstones multiple lines make sense. some of the entries are more of an obituary than epitaph.



however i seem to suck at both so hey cheers to me



i'll take a glass of wine



...vote to follow gotta think this one over.


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This one was really difficult, people!



First: 8. Begone guilt, yesterday's petty harms -


Relish life's peaches, after storms


Second: 14. Benevolent, Gallant, Youthful prize.

His righteous life, purloined at sunrise.


Third: 4. Bereft.

Graceful, youthful, playful Hart! <------ I adore the use of "Hart" here! :bowdown:

Right, left.

Picaresque avengers start.


Fourth: 13. By gods, you pass hereafter, ruling lands past always summer.


Fifth: 9. Bummer! Gone!

Young prince’s hallmark rainbows lost.

Pernicious Asshai spawn. <-------- Excellent line!!

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Has including a carriage return in your submission now become a key to victory?

I was going to encourage you to vote only for those without carriage returns, until I counted them and realised even with such a rule in place I'd get no votes.

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First: 15. Bye, Gallant Young Potential Hero, R'hllor's Light Produced A Shadow.

Second: 4. Bereft.
Graceful, youthful, playful Hart!
Right, left.
Picaresque avengers start.

Third: 14. Benevolent, Gallant, Youthful prize.
His righteous life, purloined at sunrise.

Fourth: 3. Beloved Gentle Young Peach Here Rests. Lamentably Pitted Against Stannis.

Fifth: 8. Begone guilt, yesterday's petty harms -
Relish life's peaches, after storms

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Interesting round. I've been letting them whirl around my head for a while now.

Here are my votes:

1st) 3. Beloved Gentle Young Peach Here Rests. Lamentably Pitted Against Stannis.

2nd) 13. By gods, you pass hereafter, ruling lands past always summer.

3rd) 1. Beloved graceful youth

Princely, hallowed.
Renly’s life plundered,
accursed shadow.

4th) 4. Bereft.

Graceful, youthful, playful Hart!
Right, left.
Picaresque avengers start.

5th) 16. Baratheon's great youth perished horribly. Renly lacked protection against shadows.

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ok finally decided...

first - #13. By gods, you pass hereafter, ruling lands past always summer.

second - #3. Beloved Gentle Young Peach Here Rests. Lamentably Pitted Against Stannis.

third - #14. Benevolent, Gallant, Youthful prize.
His righteous life, purloined at sunrise.

fourth - #8. Begone guilt, yesterday's petty harms -
Relish life's peaches, after storms

fifth - #5. Boldness guided you,
Patriarchy hindered review.
Loved passionately, although skewed.

good job folks, some were really good i used a tombstone generator site to see what they would look like...it was good for a laugh.

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Before I know who you are and this becomes embarrassing I just want to say when I first read #3 I felt a gentle wave of love for whoever came up with 'young peach...lamentably pitted'.

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Wow really difficult they all have positive qualities.



1) #14 - I don't know if he died at sun rise I thought he was getting undressed but I really like the way it looks on a grave in my mind ;)



2) #15 - I really liked "potential hero"



3) #9 - I really enjoyed this because it uses two of my favorite words, Bummer and Spawn!



4) #3 - This is just sweet, and even though I am not generally hung up on sweet, this one got to me



5) #8 - I was torn but ultimated chose this as my last pick because it had peaches in it in a cool way. Very philosophical.







^^ Yeah, this one is tough. :/



In the meantime I made up my own epitaph for this round (SOCR ALIIRS)



Self-conscious of carriage returns


and lacking inspiration


I reluctantly submit.




:lol:


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Before I know who you are and this becomes embarrassing I just want to say when I first read #3 I felt a gentle wave of love for whoever came up with 'young peach...lamentably pitted'.

Me too. Best of the game so far in my humble opinion.

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1. 13. By gods, you pass hereafter, ruling lands past always summer.

2. 8. Begone guilt, yesterday's petty harms -

Relish life's peaches, after storms

3. 4. Bereft.

Graceful, youthful, playful Hart!

Right, left.

Picaresque avengers start.

4. 15. Bye, Gallant Young Potential Hero, R'hllor's Light Produced A Shadow.

5. 16. Baratheon's great youth perished horribly. Renly lacked protection against shadows.

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